Mattsmd VS Mc-Itty (1-3)

[Mc-Itty]

(no beef..shits jus a battle :))

Rules:

No flips
Both Mc's gotta spit within 48 hours max
5 bars...10 lines ONLY
No hate votes, shit needs ta b broken down
First ta 3 votes, 2-0 is KO

Time limit starts soon as ya sign in ye..

Uppin fa u..

[Mc-Itty]

u got 48 hours afta me, dont flip ma shit :)

(lil warm-up)

I got dis bitch cryin cuz i crashed 'his' PARTY. I cause mo damage dan da fuckin TSUMI. shocked wen ya SAW-ME, duck down bitch im comin fa ya whole ARMY. acceptin ma callout tryin-ta-be a KAMIKAZE, no way u gon STOP-ME i dont believe in peace i'm the opposite of GHANDI!

(gettin hotter)

u a pathetic KEG bitch quit humpin ma LEG yo mouth where ya own PENIS-GOES they'll b semen flyin like wen SUBMARINES-EXPLODE. Bitch ta defeat me u need mo Skill + POTENTIAL, shits EXPONENTIAL da power comin outta ma PENCIL.

(u a dead bitch)

I KNOW-U-FEEL-IT even if ma shit was in HIEROGLYPHICS. Bitch i OUTBID u das no SECRET standin ma ground lyk a PYRAMID in EGYPT. leave u dusted lyk smolder get yo PARTICLES-ta-GATHER i put it all 2gether like a MOLECULE-from-ATOMS. Known as RELENTLESS gon put a fuckin HOLE-IN-DIS-TEXTIST. On dis forum ima UNKNOWN-PLAYER still *riding on top* dis bitch jus like tha fuckin OZONE-LAYER.Fuck i'm gon RIP-YA-NERVES, HIT-DIS-HERB. man i started AMATEUR now i'm known as DA BATTLER.

(soft ender..u already dead)

Bet u cudnt deal AUDIO, pussy cant hold a mic YO. u cud rap in ya crews pussy ta get da extra ECHO! Man if u want speed i'll give ya PACES, if ya want hard i'll knock ya BRACES, punch *both ya* FACES...if u cant feel ma shit u must b LYRICALLY RACIST.


http://forum.eminem.net/showthread.php?p=129724#post129724

http://forum.eminem.net/showthread.php?p=129843#post129843

[mattSMD]

http://forum.eminem.net/showthread.php?p=120597&posted=1#post120597
http://forum.eminem.net/showthread.php?p=120599&posted=1#post120599

in this world looks aint everything but itty, you're the opposite of pretty
and seeing as you aint even witty, i'ma snap you like you're a mcvitie*/
bitch if you grew some tits, and learned how to suck a dick
you could put it in your mouth then switch and sit on it/
when bitches ride around on it within seconds they climax
taken to the max,juices flowing need a mop, a bucket and some ajax**/
but sadly for you im not the type of guy that's into jailbait
reckon you're something great when in reality, you're only a fake/
thought at first you'd either bite your lyrics or get someone else to write your rhyme
but seeing how poor it was you must have forgotten your lines/
i always freestyle my shit and i never going on about heat or clips
cos my shit is personal to me, that's the key, not here to make a hit/
if you wanna be respected on here and want peeps to holla at you
then quit being a fool, and keep your lyrics real and true/
fifteen year old bitches piss me off, most are a load of freaks
so i take a meat cleaver to your pussy and make it look like it's rag week***

* Mc Vitie's is a make of biscuit - easy to snap
** ajax is a cleaning substance - like a disinfectant
*** rag week - term for being on her period (ie: a tampon is a rag)

no beef girl, good battle. upping for votes

[L_Nino]

MC-ITTY:

I got dis bitch cryin cuz i crashed 'his' PARTY. I cause mo damage dan da fuckin TSUMI. shocked wen ya SAW-ME, duck down bitch im comin fa ya whole ARMY. acceptin ma callout tryin-ta-be a KAMIKAZE, no way u gon STOP-ME i dont believe in peace i'm the opposite of GHANDI!

^^^ This bar was aight...Flow was a lil' choppy but an ok opener..

u a pathetic KEG bitch quit humpin ma LEG yo mouth where ya own PENIS-GOES they'll b semen flyin like wen SUBMARINES-EXPLODE. Bitch ta defeat me u need mo Skill + POTENTIAL, shits EXPONENTIAL da power comin outta ma PENCIL.

^^^ I thought that was hot...

I KNOW-U-FEEL-IT even if ma shit was in HIEROGLYPHICS. Bitch i OUTBID u das no SECRET standin ma ground lyk a PYRAMID in EGYPT. leave u dusted lyk smolder get yo PARTICLES-ta-GATHER i put it all 2gether like a MOLECULE-from-ATOMS. Known as RELENTLESS gon put a fuckin HOLE-IN-DIS-TEXTIST. On dis forum ima UNKNOWN-PLAYER still *riding on top* dis bitch jus like tha fuckin OZONE-LAYER.Fuck i'm gon RIP-YA-NERVES, HIT-DIS-HERB. man i started AMATEUR now i'm known as DA BATTLER.

^^^ Diggin' those parts...You should separate ya lines more...

Bet u cudnt deal AUDIO, pussy cant hold a mic YO. u cud rap in ya crews pussy ta get da extra ECHO! Man if u want speed i'll give ya PACES, if ya want hard i'll knock ya BRACES, punch *both ya* FACES...if u cant feel ma shit u must b LYRICALLY RACIST.

^^^ Ender was kinda soft...You kinda on the right track...Break down ya lines / Throw some personals in ya verse ma...



MATTSMD:

in this world looks aint everything but itty, you're the opposite of pretty
and seeing as you aint even witty, i'ma snap you like you're a mcvitie*/

^^^ Ehhhh...Simple..

bitch if you grew some tits, and learned how to suck a dick
you could put it in your mouth then switch and sit on it/

^^^ Not really a hard hittin' bar..

when bitches ride around on it within seconds they climax
taken to the max,juices flowing need a mop, a bucket and some ajax**/

^^^ This bar is so-so..

but sadly for you im not the type of guy that's into jailbait
reckon you're something great when in reality, you're only a fake/

^^^ Refer to Bar 2..

thought at first you'd either bite your lyrics or get someone else to write your rhyme
but seeing how poor it was you must have forgotten your lines/

^^^ Aight..

i always freestyle my shit and i never going on about heat or clips
cos my shit is personal to me, that's the key, not here to make a hit/

^^^ Filler..

if you wanna be respected on here and want peeps to holla at you
then quit being a fool, and keep your lyrics real and true/

^^^ Ehhh..

fifteen year old bitches piss me off, most are a load of freaks
so i take a meat cleaver to your pussy and make it look like it's rag week***

^^^ Ok ender...Add personals/punches...


Consistency/Structure: TIE
Creativity: I
Enjoyable: TIE
Flow: TIE
Metaphors: I
Multies: TIE
Personal: SMD
Punches: TIE
Vocabulary: TIE
Wordplay: I
Overall: Mc-Itty...seen better battles from both..


VOTE: MC-ITTY

[Zac the Ripper]

mc itty:

I got dis bitch cryin cuz i crashed 'his' PARTY. I cause mo damage dan da fuckin TSUMI. shocked wen ya SAW-ME, duck down bitch im comin fa ya whole ARMY. acceptin ma callout tryin-ta-be a KAMIKAZE, no way u gon STOP-ME i dont believe in peace i'm the opposite of GHANDI!

decent opener... could have been better.

u a pathetic KEG bitch quit humpin ma LEG yo mouth where ya own PENIS-GOES they'll b semen flyin like wen SUBMARINES-EXPLODE. Bitch ta defeat me u need mo Skill + POTENTIAL, shits EXPONENTIAL da power comin outta ma PENCIL.

dope.

I KNOW-U-FEEL-IT even if ma shit was in HIEROGLYPHICS. Bitch i OUTBID u das no SECRET standin ma ground lyk a PYRAMID in EGYPT. leave u dusted lyk smolder get yo PARTICLES-ta-GATHER i put it all 2gether like a MOLECULE-from-ATOMS. Known as RELENTLESS gon put a fuckin HOLE-IN-DIS-TEXTIST. On dis forum ima UNKNOWN-PLAYER still *riding on top* dis bitch jus like tha fuckin OZONE-LAYER.Fuck i'm gon RIP-YA-NERVES, HIT-DIS-HERB. man i started AMATEUR now i'm known as DA BATTLER.

good... split up your lines though.

Bet u cudnt deal AUDIO, pussy cant hold a mic YO. u cud rap in ya crews pussy ta get da extra ECHO! Man if u want speed i'll give ya PACES, if ya want hard i'll knock ya BRACES, punch *both ya* FACES...if u cant feel ma shit u must b LYRICALLY RACIST.

not a very good ending... kinda let me down with the second line of that bar.

MattSMD:

in this world looks aint everything but itty, you're the opposite of pretty
and seeing as you aint even witty, i'ma snap you like you're a mcvitie*/

like this opener better.

bitch if you grew some tits, and learned how to suck a dick
you could put it in your mouth then switch and sit on it/

not bad...

when bitches ride around on it within seconds they climax
taken to the max,juices flowing need a mop, a bucket and some ajax**/

filler.

but sadly for you im not the type of guy that's into jailbait
reckon you're something great when in reality, you're only a fake/

better.

thought at first you'd either bite your lyrics or get someone else to write your rhyme
but seeing how poor it was you must have forgotten your lines/

good... attack the ability...

i always freestyle my shit and i never going on about heat or clips
cos my shit is personal to me, that's the key, not here to make a hit/

dope bar itself, but here it seems like filler.

if you wanna be respected on here and want peeps to holla at you
then quit being a fool, and keep your lyrics real and true/

good

fifteen year old bitches piss me off, most are a load of freaks
so i take a meat cleaver to your pussy and make it look like it's rag week***

dope ender.


another good battle, but this wasn't either's best. I'd have to give my vote to matt.

[Inevitable]

1-1, uppin for more votes.

[slimshadyLP]

MC-ITTY:

I got dis bitch cryin cuz i crashed 'his' PARTY. I cause mo damage dan da fuckin TSUMI. shocked wen ya SAW-ME, duck down bitch im comin fa ya whole ARMY. acceptin ma callout tryin-ta-be a KAMIKAZE, no way u gon STOP-ME i dont believe in peace i'm the opposite of GHANDI!

not bad

u a pathetic KEG bitch quit humpin ma LEG yo mouth where ya own PENIS-GOES they'll b semen flyin like wen SUBMARINES-EXPLODE. Bitch ta defeat me u need mo Skill + POTENTIAL, shits EXPONENTIAL da power comin outta ma PENCIL.

its was descent

I KNOW-U-FEEL-IT even if ma shit was in HIEROGLYPHICS. Bitch i OUTBID u das no SECRET standin ma ground lyk a PYRAMID in EGYPT. leave u dusted lyk smolder get yo PARTICLES-ta-GATHER i put it all 2gether like a MOLECULE-from-ATOMS. Known as RELENTLESS gon put a fuckin HOLE-IN-DIS-TEXTIST. On dis forum ima UNKNOWN-PLAYER still *riding on top* dis bitch jus like tha fuckin OZONE-LAYER.Fuck i'm gon RIP-YA-NERVES, HIT-DIS-HERB. man i started AMATEUR now i'm known as DA BATTLER.

wow

Bet u cudnt deal AUDIO, pussy cant hold a mic YO. u cud rap in ya crews pussy ta get da extra ECHO! Man if u want speed i'll give ya PACES, if ya want hard i'll knock ya BRACES, punch *both ya* FACES...if u cant feel ma shit u must b LYRICALLY RACIST.

meh


MATTSMD:

in this world looks aint everything but itty, you're the opposite of pretty
and seeing as you aint even witty, i'ma snap you like you're a mcvitie*/

nope

bitch if you grew some tits, and learned how to suck a dick
you could put it in your mouth then switch and sit on it/

too simple

when bitches ride around on it within seconds they climax
taken to the max,juices flowing need a mop, a bucket and some ajax**/

not bad

but sadly for you im not the type of guy that's into jailbait
reckon you're something great when in reality, you're only a fake/

nah i didnt like this

thought at first you'd either bite your lyrics or get someone else to write your rhyme
but seeing how poor it was you must have forgotten your lines/

ok

i always freestyle my shit and i never going on about heat or clips
cos my shit is personal to me, that's the key, not here to make a hit/

ok

if you wanna be respected on here and want peeps to holla at you
then quit being a fool, and keep your lyrics real and true/

ok

fifteen year old bitches piss me off, most are a load of freaks
so i take a meat cleaver to your pussy and make it look like it's rag week***

not bad


Consistency/Structure: TIE
Creativity: TIE
Enjoyable: TIE
Flow: M
Metaphors: I
Multies: TIE
Personal: M
Punches: TIE
Vocabulary: TIE
Wordplay: I
Overall: CLOSE BUT MC ITTY WONS.

[Inevitable]

2-1 to Itty, uppin for more votes.

[CapZ]

IGHT...


Consistency/Structure: TIE
Creativity: MAT
Enjoyable: TIE
Flow: TIE
Metaphors: TIE
Multies: MC
Personal: TIE
Punches: TIE
Vocabulary: TIE
Wordplay: TIE
Overall: Mc-Itty... Yup ok battle


VOTE: MC-ITTY


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[Inevitable]

Itty wins 3-1.

*CLOSED