KaSpaH vs kaspir

[KaSpaH]

I'ma start this shit off by pointin out this fucka's-name,
second, every bitch that challenged me got murked; that struck-us-lame,
but aint no white 16 year old 'spit' better than "ka-spir"'s-mom,
or even swallow if thats the case, suck till the last-sperm-gone,
like mother like son aint that right, you know-its-true,
i heard your dad in yo bedroom screaming out "BLOW-IT-BOO",
the only thing sicker than that last line that i can think-about,
is you tryena beat you're role model, so sharp, i even sting-the-crowd,
MattSMD'll be walking out with his eye swollen(n/b bro)
"kaspir" dont even try and look back just keep your ride rollin,
the only difference between us 2 ghosts is that this ones got no-heart,
your lookin at a cold mutherfucka that knows how to flow-hard.
BITCH

(I'll put the links up in a bit)

[kaspir]

my links
http://forum.eminem.net/showthread.php?t=10725
http://forum.eminem.net/showthread.php?p=129566#post129566



kaspah i read half your verse and could tell you had no brains//
you'll probably end up under a mcdonalds drive through picking up dropped change//

with no rap career always asking "why they turn me down so quick"//
its cuz your rhymes make less sense than the sequal to the blair witch//

seriously dude you would have to be brain dead to say that shit//
your dad must have impregnated a flower cuz your a blooming idiot//

i guess when your physically killed your a ghost flyin like a bird//
but after this battle i'll see what happens to one when hes lyrically murdered//

so dont think you can beat me you'll pay dearly for your incompetance//
along with your house and ever one of its occupants//

[Zac the Ripper]

okay... here we go:

Kaspah:

I'ma start this shit off by pointin out this fucka's-name,
second, every bitch that challenged me got murked; that struck-us-lame,

not a very good opener kinda didn't rhyme.

but aint no white 16 year old 'spit' better than "ka-spir"'s-mom,
or even swallow if thats the case, suck till the last-sperm-gone,

okay, I was feeling this one...

like mother like son aint that right, you know-its-true,
i heard your dad in yo bedroom screaming out "BLOW-IT-BOO",

Nice...

the only thing sicker than that last line that i can think-about,
is you tryena beat you're role model, so sharp, i even sting-the-crowd,

okay...

MattSMD'll be walking out with his eye swollen(n/b bro)
"kaspir" dont even try and look back just keep your ride rollin,

ehhhh...

the only difference between us 2 ghosts is that this ones got no-heart,
your lookin at a cold mutherfucka that knows how to flow-hard.
BITCH

decent end.

Kaspir:

kaspah i read half your verse and could tell you had no brains//
you'll probably end up under a mcdonalds drive through picking up dropped change//

decent opener... better than kaspah's

with no rap career always asking "why they turn me down so quick"//
its cuz your rhymes make less sense than the sequal to the blair witch//

Dope.

seriously dude you would have to be brain dead to say that shit//
your dad must have impregnated a flower cuz your a blooming idiot//

okay...

i guess when your physically killed your a ghost flyin like a bird//
but after this battle i'll see what happens to one when hes lyrically murdered//

eh...

so dont think you can beat me you'll pay dearly for your incompetance//
along with your house and ever one of its occupants//

liked kaspah's ending better

Creativity: tie
Flow: kaspir
multies: n/a
metaphor: Kaspir
enjoyable: kaspir
structure: kaspir

vote: kaspir

[Duane]

kaspah took this battle straight up and down, he dun belong here, looks like people on this forum have never heard of multies.. this was an interesting battle, kaspah vs kaspir hehe.... wheres an uzi when you need one..
kaspah where you been mang?? i never see yo ass on methical, but whatever i got banned from that shit along time ago, wheres lasadaii at? an uh dont forget to register at wucorp, its gonna be up again in no time.. but ima vote now....




I'ma start this shit off by pointin out this fucka's-name,
second, every bitch that challenged me got murked; that struck-us-lame,

not such a good opener, shouldve finished the first line better... but i like it that you always make the end of every 2 lines perfect like that, thats ill mang

but aint no white 16 year old 'spit' better than "ka-spir"'s-mom,
or even swallow if thats the case, suck till the last-sperm-gone,

heheehe

like mother like son aint that right, you know-its-true,
i heard your dad in yo bedroom screaming out "BLOW-IT-BOO",

lol dope, this line killed it for me

the only thing sicker than that last line that i can think-about,
is you tryena beat you're role model, so sharp, i even sting-the-crowd,

um.. NO, filler

MattSMD'll be walking out with his eye swollen(n/b bro)
"kaspir" dont even try and look back just keep your ride rollin,

i dint get this line, whats n/b

the only difference between us 2 ghosts is that this ones got no-heart,
your lookin at a cold mutherfucka that knows how to flow-hard.
BITCH

not a good ending, another filler.. lets look at thiss other cats verse....


kaspah i read half your verse and could tell you had no brains//
you'll probably end up under a mcdonalds drive through picking up dropped change//

hehe funny.. learn not to end only the last syllable, thats weak

with no rap career always asking "why they turn me down so quick"//
its cuz your rhymes make less sense than the sequal to the blair witch//

HA funny, you got potential, i hope the rest of this shit hasnt got the same rhyme scheme as this..................

seriously dude you would have to be brain dead to say that shit//
your dad must have impregnated a flower cuz your a blooming idiot//

uh....

i guess when your physically killed your a ghost flyin like a bird//
but after this battle i'll see what happens to one when hes lyrically murdered//

.........

so dont think you can beat me you'll pay dearly for your incompetance//
along with your house and ever one of its occupants//

ehh... that ending was weak as fuck, even worse than kaspahs

my vote= kaspah, he had much better flow and his verse made me laugh like they used to.... you can do better than this but you still dope, keep it up holmes, dun ask who this is

[Syze]

Kaspah:

"I'ma start this shit off by pointin out this fucka's-name,
second, every bitch that challenged me got murked; that struck-us-lame,"

^M'eh.

"but aint no white 16 year old 'spit' better than "ka-spir"'s-mom,
or even swallow if thats the case, suck till the last-sperm-gone,"

^Decent.

"like mother like son aint that right, you know-its-true,
i heard your dad in yo bedroom screaming out "BLOW-IT-BOO","

^Played.

"the only thing sicker than that last line that i can think-about,
is you tryena beat you're role model, so sharp, i even sting-the-crowd,"

^Decent.

"MattSMD'll be walking out with his eye swollen(n/b bro)
"kaspir" dont even try and look back just keep your ride rollin,"

^Filler.

"the only difference between us 2 ghosts is that this ones got no-heart,
your lookin at a cold mutherfucka that knows how to flow-hard."

^No real diss there, poor closer.

Kaspir:

"kaspah i read half your verse and could tell you had no brains//
you'll probably end up under a mcdonalds drive through picking up dropped change//"

^M'eh.

"with no rap career always asking "why they turn me down so quick"//
its cuz your rhymes make less sense than the sequal to the blair witch//"

^Haha...

"seriously dude you would have to be brain dead to say that shit//
your dad must have impregnated a flower cuz your a blooming idiot//"

^That was so stupid it was funny, bery original, although pathetic rhyming...

"i guess when your physically killed your a ghost flyin like a bird//
but after this battle i'll see what happens to one when hes lyrically murdered//"

^Nothing...

"so dont think you can beat me you'll pay dearly for your incompetance//
along with your house and ever one of its occupants//"

^Awful closer.

Due to better rhyming and more punches, gotta go to Kaspah...

[mattSMD]

Kaspah:

"I'ma start this shit off by pointin out this fucka's-name,
second, every bitch that challenged me got murked; that struck-us-lame,"

^weak, sounded like u had nothing better to say

"but aint no white 16 year old 'spit' better than "ka-spir"'s-mom,
or even swallow if thats the case, suck till the last-sperm-gone,"

^good bar, not bad use of bad mum jokes

"like mother like son aint that right, you know-its-true,
i heard your dad in yo bedroom screaming out "BLOW-IT-BOO","

^filler

"the only thing sicker than that last line that i can think-about,
is you tryena beat you're role model, so sharp, i even sting-the-crowd,"

^good, maybe could'a used a multie

"MattSMD'll be walking out with his eye swollen(n/b bro)
"kaspir" dont even try and look back just keep your ride rollin,"

^no beef. dont know why you put me in there though! filler

"the only difference between us 2 ghosts is that this ones got no-heart,
your lookin at a cold mutherfucka that knows how to flow-hard."

^should have made this a personal for a hard closer

Kaspir:

"kaspah i read half your verse and could tell you had no brains//
you'll probably end up under a mcdonalds drive through picking up dropped change//"

^i felt this, good opener

"with no rap career always asking "why they turn me down so quick"//
its cuz your rhymes make less sense than the sequal to the blair witch//"

^good

"seriously dude you would have to be brain dead to say that shit//
your dad must have impregnated a flower cuz your a blooming idiot//"

^ very good meta

"i guess when your physically killed your a ghost flyin like a bird//
but after this battle i'll see what happens to one when hes lyrically murdered//"

^physically/lyrically - played

"so dont think you can beat me you'll pay dearly for your incompetance//
along with your house and ever one of its occupants//"

^not bad

tight but i'm giving this to kaspir, i personally thought he was the better spitter, although dissapointing lack of multies

[Bakkie]

Kaspah:

I'ma start this shit off by pointin out this fucka's-name,
second, every bitch that challenged me got murked; that struck-us-lame,

Bit of a weak opener...dragged a little

but aint no white 16 year old 'spit' better than "ka-spir"'s-mom,
or even swallow if thats the case, suck till the last-sperm-gone,

This was better..good flow

like mother like son aint that right, you know-its-true,
i heard your dad in yo bedroom screaming out "BLOW-IT-BOO",

lol nice...

the only thing sicker than that last line that i can think-about,
is you tryena beat you're role model, so sharp, i even sting-the-crowd,

ehhh..im not feeling this

MattSMD'll be walking out with his eye swollen(n/b bro)
"kaspir" dont even try and look back just keep your ride rollin,

nahh the bro and rollin just doesnt make go

the only difference between us 2 ghosts is that this ones got no-heart,
your lookin at a cold mutherfucka that knows how to flow-hard.
BITCH

Ok ending

Kaspir:

kaspah i read half your verse and could tell you had no brains//
you'll probably end up under a mcdonalds drive through picking up dropped change//

LOL i like'd this opener

with no rap career always asking "why they turn me down so quick"//
its cuz your rhymes make less sense than the sequal to the blair witch//

This is good

seriously dude you would have to be brain dead to say that shit//
your dad must have impregnated a flower cuz your a blooming idiot//

i like the creativity here

i guess when your physically killed your a ghost flyin like a bird//
but after this battle i'll see what happens to one when hes lyrically murdered//

ehh im not feeling this dude flows off and bird n murder nah..

so dont think you can beat me you'll pay dearly for your incompetance//
along with your house and ever one of its occupants//

Okay ending

Creativity: Both
Flow: kaspir
multies: nahh..
metaphor: Kaspir
enjoyable: kaspir
structure: kaspir

vote: kaspir...well done dawg i can see your improving

[Inevitable]

Its 3-2 to Kaspir, but no links from Kaspah.

*CLOSED