Frog VS Mc-Itty (0-4 KO)

[Mc-Itty]

10 bars max...20 lines..
no hate/crew/dickrydin votes
first ta 3 votes, 2-0 is KO
Itty (me) spittin first
u gotta spit 24 hours after me
No flips

Sign in ...i shud have ma drop in after ma exam 2morrow mornin

[FrOg]

let´s do this...
props

[Mc-Itty]

*Keystyled!!*, aite u said the MAX was 10 bars so i got 5:

http://forum.eminem.net/showthread.php?p=129477#post129477

http://forum.eminem.net/showthread.php?p=129525#post129525


Either hot or not dis Frog got *buck-teeth* wit mo facial *dis-abili-ties* dan a fat bitch screamin *suck-me*! (1)

Dawg u jus a Frog, ima fuckin *sabertooth*, gon make it thru an leave dis punk da colour of *tomato-juice* (2)

Punk may be green wit envy but wont eva b 'sick', not even if he sucked on gold members dick (3)

Speakin bout colour y dont u quit rap an move-on, this punk wudnt eva b gold even if i put em in a tannin salon (4)

Only 'pro' quality b yo Foot-ball-squad man Fuck-dis-Frog, bitch cant *dispute-ma-team* i roll wit 'bad apples' an i don mean a *fruit-machine* (5)

Got it *Held-by-ears* his worry is *outspelled-by-tears* still *dispelled-by-fears* by 'hoppin' he *impelled-fa-years*


Mc-Itty xXx
*Hate me cuz i speak da Truth*
Uppin ya verse!...

[FrOg]

http://forum.eminem.net/showpost.php?p=129534&postcount=12

http://forum.eminem.net/showthread.php?p=129538#post129538


Ma verse

Your gonna die cause you of ma poisened spiting/
I'm just gonna rip your eyes off 'n' say: "Just kildding!"*1/
Jus' don´t make me stop, ear you screaming and see u bleedin'/

If u wanna tomato juice come suck it/
And when u finish you can play with the stik/
Then I'm gonna blow your head off 'cause i'm sick of this shit/

Mc Ity?Fagot name forget it!!
Shut up!And just keep playing dead in this spit!/
Fo your rimes... na you jus' can´t make it/
Neither to thegame or anywere with it!
Ma pulvarizin' rimes kill u and... that´s it!


no beef

explaine:

*1 "Kildind" - kill+kidding, killin' fo fun!

[kaspir]

Consistency/Structure: mc-itty
Creativity: mc-itty
Enjoyable:mc-itty
Flow: mc-itty
Metaphors: mc-itty
Multies: both
Personal:mc-itty
Punches: mc-itty
Vocabulary: mc-itty
Wordplay:mc-itty
Overall:mc-itty

[Enfleurage]

mc-itty wins

[CapZ]

Punches- Mc
Personals- Mc
Multies- Mc
Vocab- Mc
Mets- Tie
Enjoyed- Tie
Creative- Mc
Wordplay- Mc

Overall- Mc Itty Took Dis Nice Shit Ma'



`1`

[Lyricologist_RiCo]

Mc Itty

Either hot or not dis Frog got *buck-teeth* wit mo facial *dis-abili-ties* dan a fat bitch screamin *suck-me*! (1)

an ok opener

Dawg u jus a Frog, ima fuckin *sabertooth*, gon make it thru an leave dis punk da colour of *tomato-juice* (2)

good creativity....liked dis one

Punk may be green wit envy but wont eva b 'sick', not even if he sucked on gold members dick (3)

lol....good

Speakin bout colour y dont u quit rap an move-on, this punk wudnt eva b gold even if i put em in a tannin salon (4)

nice

Only 'pro' quality b yo Foot-ball-squad man Fuck-dis-Frog, bitch cant *dispute-ma-team* i roll wit 'bad apples' an i don mean a *fruit-machine* (5)

liked da first line better

Got it *Held-by-ears* his worry is *outspelled-by-tears* still *dispelled-by-fears* by 'hoppin' he *impelled-fa-years*

nice outro


Frog

Your gonna die cause you of ma poisened spiting/
I'm just gonna rip your eyes off 'n' say: "Just kildding!"*1/
Jus' don´t make me stop, ear you screaming and see u bleedin'/

intro was ok not da best....second line was corny as hell...third jus..i wasnt feelin it

If u wanna tomato juice come suck it/
And when u finish you can play with the stik/
Then I'm gonna blow your head off 'cause i'm sick of this shit/

first line was ok.....but rest was not a hard punch....still corny

Mc Ity?Fagot name forget it!!
Shut up!And just keep playing dead in this spit!/
Fo your rimes... na you jus' can´t make it/
Neither to thegame or anywere with it!
Ma pulvarizin' rimes kill u and... that´s it!

ok.......lame very lame....bad outro


Consistency/Structure: Mc
Creativity: Mc
Enjoyable:Mc
Flow: Mc
Metaphors:Mc
Multies: Mc
Personal:Neither
Punches: Mc.....By Far
Vocabulary: Mc
Wordplay:Mc
Overall:Mc


My Vote:::: MC Itty Won dis by far...easy win

[Inevitable]

Mc Itty wins 4-0 KO.

*CLOSED