Bakkie Vs. Kaspir (3-0 KO)

[Bakkie]

Rulez:

no dikridin/h8 votez/crew votez
5 bar spit (10 lines)
first to 5 wins
3.0 k.o

good luck hommie

[kaspir]

here are my links
http://forum.eminem.net/showthread.php?t=10345
http://forum.eminem.net/showthread.php?t=10735


i guess i'll go first. this is the best i could do with no battling experience.


this is a time to be violent so im going to strike swift and silent//
with a punch to your jaw hard enough to knock your spine out of alignment//

so push me over the edge im ready to inflict some serious damage//
put you at a disadvantage by ripping off a limb and beating you with the severed appendage//

winning this battle youve got a better chance of outrunning an avalanche on a vaction//
why do your rhymes suck so bad you must look to icp for inspiration//

heres a question you might find it relative to your situation//
do you bite lines have someone write for you or is it a combination//

your expectation of the outcome of this battle will be altered//
try to murder me all you want cuz i got you slaughtered//

[Bakkie]

http://forum.eminem.net/showthread....7375#post127375
http://forum.eminem.net/showthread.php?t=10691

Yo Bitch you could'nt light the room up even if you was a lamp post,
How you guna be violent and punch when your Kaspir the friendly ghost,

Shit man this be your first battle and you have already earned a lost,
I.C.U is were your going to end up with a free sex change at no cost,*

Your seventeen and still yet to penatrate a girl,dude you need some sex,
Man your dick must be more shrink RAPPED than the decks of Funkmaster Flex,**

Kaspir this battle is finished man your DEAD and gone close ya Dictionary,
Because the next bar's you will be writting is a full page for your Obituary,***

I hope you have learned a lesson from my effortless combination,
I've had more tougher battle's than this on Tekkan for the playstation.****

Explanations

* I.C.U is my crew and it stands for 'intensive Care Unit'.
**Funkmaster Flex is a artist and DJ. RAPPED meaning flex has rapped wid his decks for years and kaspir's dink has been shrink rapped for years you shud get it.
***Obituary is a written page about your life when you die.
****Tekkan is a game on the playstation.

UPPIN 4 VOTEZ good luck kaspir.

[Inevitable]

Uppin for votes.

[L_Nino]

Consistency/Structure: TIE
Creativity: B
Enjoyable: TIE
Flow: TIE
Metaphors: TIE
Multies: TIE
Personal: B
Punches: TIE
Vocabulary: TIE
Wordplay: TIE
Overall: Bakkie...but it was a weak battle..


VOTE: BAKKIE

[Inevitable]

1-0 to Bakkie, uppin for more votes.

[TzVe Em]

Consistency/Structure: Bakkie
Creativity: Bakkie
Enjoyable: tie
Flow: the other one
Metaphors: bakkie
Multies: TIE
Personal: bakkie
Punches: tie
Vocabulary: tie
Wordplay: tie
Overall: bakkie



sry 2 da oda guy but bakkie did bttr, seen bttr from u tho bakkie. gd shit.

[Inevitable]

2-0 to Bakkie, uppin for more votes.

[mattSMD]

yo kaspir u sure you're not kaspah? anyways.....

Consistency/Structure: tie
Creativity: Bakkie
Enjoyable: bakkie
Flow: bakkie
Metaphors: bakkie
Multies: none
Personal: neither
Punches: bakkie
Vocabulary: neither
Wordplay: neither
Overall: bakkie

bakkie got this. weak though, you both need to use more personals and start using multies

[Inevitable]

Bakkie wins 3-0 KO.

*CLOSED