slimshadyLP vs. TzVe Em (3-0 KO)

[slimshadyLP]

rules:

unlimited lines
no d/r, biting, hate votes or crew votes
5 votes to win or 3-0 KO


ill go first. git ur linx.

http://forum.eminem.net/showthread.php?p=127112&posted=1#post127112
http://forum.eminem.net/showthread.php?p=127121#post127121

[TzVe Em]

http://forum.eminem.net/showthread.php?t=10439&page=7
http://forum.eminem.net/showthread.php?p=127110#post127110

aite hears da links,

spit ya shit shady xD

[slimshadyLP]

why should i battle TzVe he cant even spell,
ya rhymes is frail, maybe its a message, TzVe trys to hide from VeTz like dave chappelle//

dawg, your rapping will never improve even if you are a boxer,
just cuz you punch me with red gloves doesnt mean your rhymes will be hotter//

another attempt to revamp his rhymes by playing soccer at home,
yelling lines at the net doesnt mean you scored a goal//

u aint gonna win ya just another attempter cuz my rhymes split you to pieces like i was blender,
i mold you like clay as if you were graphically rendered//

i dont want you to win multies so i use weak rhymes like this to make you start to run,
ur like a smoked out blunt, a dirty runt that cant cum cuz his "battle ship sunk"//

ur rhymes will never touch me, no matter how much u ever box,
TzVe Em has 3 caps cause he knows this is his 3rd upcoming loss//

EXPLANATIONS
ya rhymes is frail, maybe its a message, TzVe trys to hide from VeTz like dave chappelle//
-TzVe's letters can be changed to spell vatz which is veteranz

dawg, your rapping will never improve even if you are a boxer
- in his profile it says he boxes.

another attempt to revamp his rhymes by playing soccer at home,
-says he plays soccer also.

ur turn drop.

[TzVe Em]

I control ya spit with spirtual 'VOODO', dats y my dawg spits bettr then 'U DO'
tis is my first KO its '2 TRUE', i'll make u choke wid my legendry 'KUNG FU'//

So ur a 'SUICIDAL', BITCH GET THE FUCK UP and buy urself a 'BIBLE',
sue god for making u a 'TRIBAL', ull find jesus is very 'UNRELIABLE'//

you say dat u r 'TWISTED', but infact ur only 'LISTED',
FOR BEIN A GAY AMERICAN DAT WISH HE NVR 'EXISTED'//

Ur 14 n is vry 'CONFUSED', wethr or not u ave been 'SEXUALLY ABUSED'
to find from the police dat ur 'ACCUSED' of raping an old ldy wid a dick dats nvr been 'USED'//


wats up wid ur ryhmes dere 'TOO WEAK', dere 2 old n would be considered an 'ANTIQUE'
yo bitch ur gettig out ryhmed change the 'TECHNIQUE', consider me lyrically 'UNIQUE'//


slimshadyLP, the wack bitch 'MC', aint no lnger on a winning 'SPREE'
and bitch i 'guarantee', this punk ass mother fucker will be left with 'debris'//

/////////////////////////////////////////////////////////////////////////////

any thnk need xplain just ask. 2 me tis is much bttr than da last 2 fuckin battles.

CHECK HIS FUCKING PROFILE B4 POSTIN SHIT BOUT MY SPIT

[TzVe Em]

if syze votes it dnt count aite?

[TzVe Em]

votes plz, syze banned from this vote, its obs he gnna vote gainst me.

so vtez plz.

[TzVe Em]

yeah votez would b nice tnx. just tke's like 1 min to vote n read.

[chappy]

Consistency/Structure: T
Creativity: S
Enjoyable: S
Flow: T
Metaphors: S
Multies: T
Personal: S
Punches: S
Vocabulary: S
Wordplay: S
Overall: slimshadyLP

[Gh0$T]

Consistency/Structure: S
Creativity: S
Enjoyable: S
Flow: S
Metaphors: N/A
Multies: N/A
Personal: S
Punches: N/a
Vocabulary: T
Wordplay: N/a
Overall: Slim

Pretty Weak Battle... Keep Improvin Tho

[TzVe Em]

tnx 4 votin,

2 - 0 2 shady.

uppin vots plz.

[TzVe Em]

uppin 4 votez plz.
+least dis is da first tme me got a categry :P xD :zombie:


2 - 0 - shady

[kaspir]

Consistency/Structure: sslp
Creativity: sslp
Enjoyable: sslp
Flow: tz
Metaphors: sslp
Multies: tz
Personal: sslp
Punches: sslp
Vocabulary: tz
Wordplay: sslp
Overall: sslp

[slimshadyLP]

guess i win. nice battle. u hav done so much better on this battle than ur others.

close this up someone.