Tzve em vs. Nickdiesel

[nickdiesel]

rules..the 15 lines you wanted are uneven, so make it 12-16 lines-no h8 or crew votes, biting, or recycling...drop when you're ready...good luck...

[TzVe Em]

aite, im workin on it now.. u want to spit first?

[TzVe Em]

Aite lets make it 22 lines max ok?? is dat ok wid u

[TzVe Em]

yo pops, your a wreck,
your words wont take effect,
the results i wont check,
your a problem thats stirring,
just a spec on the map,
and i sense who the judges preffering
and to say that im learning,
and urging the truth to come out,
when you had a dick in your mouth,
and your mum giving head round the corner,
asking for a quarter, from every daughter,
to have lesbian sex in the bed, but instead,
she got raped and taped on video and sold on ebay,
this happend everday, the guys lead her astray,
forced to obey, and she felt betrayed,
cos they over stayed there stay,
and the whole world saw the display,
from what happend in the ally way,
this everyday life from the nickdiesel family,
its a tradgedy, so sad to see this felony,
but who gives a FUCK about this chump.


here goes shit

[nickdiesel]

Silly Romanian, I spit like the devil's anti-christ Damien
Leave ya dead body sinkin' subterranean...in the Mediterranean

You? zero punches, slice your body thin like bagged lunches
rip out ya ribs make em show like John Basedow abdominal crunches

You can't be nervous, I just ripped out ya spinal chord
Use that to push your cranial space in a game of shuffle board

Meet ya second loss, best jump ship like Randy Moss
Servin' this turkey up that's how i floss...side of cranberry sauce

I'm ya boss, style Tony Danza, hold down the west like bonanza
Luxury car extravaganza...keep pedalin' that Nissan Stanza

For what it's worth, though you're on the other side of the earth
I still Bust hard through pussies like you like a feet first child birth

I jump through bars aerobic, keep ya shit bottled up and claustrophobic
check the profile of this no-dick-ho-bitch...he's homophobic

Go grab ya inhaler, hem ya weak ass down like a taylor
Grab a steak bust it through your heart like ya boy Vlad the Impaler

Eastern European, what ya seein' is what i'm meanin'
Nuclear warhead pointed at ya dome like i'm a North Korean


...it's wack i know but i did it fast and i'm pretty sure it should be fine. Not a serious battle verse at all... did it in between studying for my last exam...lil study break...

[nickdiesel]

http://forum.eminem.net/showthread.php?t=10520
http://forum.eminem.net/showthread.php?t=9753&page=2&pp=10

[L_Nino]

HAHAHAHAHA....Thought he was jokin'...





NickDiesel hands down.....



Lemme know if you want it broke down...

[TzVe Em]

even tho mine would murk any1 at me skool i still suck at tis place.

0 - 1 to nickdiesel, gj.

[Potent]

LOL LOL LOL - same as L - nic ripped it on ALL cats as i sed he wud. not even a need to break it down.

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[chappy]

Nick on all cats........does it need to be explained?

[Bakkie]

Hands Down to nick soz Tzve just need sum more improvment

[TzVe Em]

haha np.

gj nick :P i'll be back. xD

[slimshadyLP]

Consistency/Structure: N
Creativity: N
Enjoyable: N
Flow: N
Metaphors: N
Multies: N
Personal: N
Punches: N
Vocabulary: N
Wordplay: N
Overall: N

[CapZ]

keep ya head up em.. just elevate but he came way harder...



ALL CATS

INTRO- N
-PUNCHES-N
PERSONALS-N
-MULTIES-N
METS-N
-FLOW- TIE
CREATIVE-N
-ENJOED- N

OVERALL- NICK



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[Inevitable]

*CLOSED, until I get 2 links from TzVe Em.