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CapZ
05-17-2005, 03:13 PM
5 barz/10 lines

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CapZ
05-18-2005, 04:16 PM
http://forum.eminem.net/showthread.php?t=10274&page=2
http://forum.eminem.net/showthread.php?t=10535&page=2

``Open Dis Vergin``

``Ima Show Dis Nino Whoz Boss N 'Payin Fans' Still Wouldnt Give U Any Applause!``
``Mann U Know Ur Feelin 'Defeat' Cuz Ur 'First Initial' Ta Ya 'Name' Is Even A Loss!!`` 1 Gyea

``I Aint Playin``

``Son I Never Even Heard Of U?? Maybe Cuz I Dont Listen-Ta-Wacks!!``
``Dis Idiot Prolly Already 'Droped His Verse' But Yo U Miss-In-Ya-Raps!!`` 2 Damn..
``L Stop Actin 'Frutiy' Cuz Mann I Aint U So I Dont Do Dat Gay-Shid``[Shit]
``N Faggot..Why U Lyin? Ur An 'Adult' Why Ur 'Named' As "A-Kid?!!" 3 LOL
``Ya Most Likly Want Ta Jus 'General Chat Wit Me' But Fuk Dat I Rether-Battle!`` [Rather]
``N Last Time I Checked 'L Nino' Was Only 'Showin' On Da Weather-Channel!!`` 4 damn

``Da End``

``Imaa Bout Ta Kill Dis Nino Cuz Ma 'Deadly' 'Thoughtz' Be So "Murder-Minded"
``N Shit C'in Ya 'Battles' Ur 'Bars R Stretched' Cuz U Want Ta Further-Rhyme-It!!`` 5 O Shit


`````EXPLANATIONS``````
`1` Self Explained Jus Dissin Him... Fans= Applause ya know... Punch/creative/Personal L= Loss His Intial...
`2` Self Explaned Just a Hard Punch By Sayin Seein am Dropin First he prolly already did but he forgot his lyrics Crative Shit
`3` Nameplay N Wordplay... He 19 already A ADULT!! WHY IS HE NAME AS "A KID" LMAO Personal/Diss
`4`General Chat is a Fourm in Dis Site n i use Wordplay...N LOL L Nino is a Weather So ye LMAO.... PERSONAL
`5` Selfed Explained....Dissin him[Nice Tho huh] LOL DAMN Dis True i checked his battles n his BARS R STRECHED AS FUCK HE DOES DAT JUS SO HE CAN RHYME!! LOL PERSONAL PUNCH GET OUT OF HERE!!,LOL DAMN.. N HE PROLLY Gona fix His Verse now,ROFL..

L_Nino
05-18-2005, 09:42 PM
http://forum.eminem.net/showthread.php?t=10535
http://forum.eminem.net/showthread.php?t=10274

1) I BEEN SHOT & that was the only time I thought CAPZ WAS HOT...CapZ raps is not, COCKY? Yeah HE TALKIN' BIG but thats only when the CAPS is LOCKed /
YOU NOT DOPE, Holdin' a TACO IN YA HAND only way YA WRAPS IS HOT...YOU REALLY SEE CAPZ when YA PUNK ASS GET POPPED, Niggas think YOU HAD PARKINSONS but its jus' that CAPZ IN SHOCK /


2) Do you like a GUNSHOT WOUND to YA HEAD & BLOW YA MIND so YOU in SUDDEN DEATH like it's OVERTIME...Never PLAYED THE FIELD jus' RODE THE PINE, Forum wouldn't HAVE YA BACK even if I THROW YA SPINE /
IVAN, YA VERSE NOT EXCITIN', Why use EXCLAIMATION POINTS (!!) when YOU GOT BORIN' RHYMES?....Atleast YOU DIDNT GO OVER THE BAR LIMIT & Im surprised, Cuz MOST OF YA PEOPLE known for GOIN' OVER LINES / (crossin' the border)


3) HE STILL A MINOR but UNDERAGE BITCHES always get PLAY IN THE CLUB, Did HIS RESEARCH ON ME to see what HE AINT CAPABLE OF...I'm BUSTIN' CAPZ & I aint talkin' 'bout BLAZIN' A SLUG or SPRAYIN' THIS BUG /
COVERIN' YASELF IN BEES only way YOU MAKIN' A BUZZ, YA VERSE WACK I aint YA CHICK so I AINT FAKIN' IT cuz ....CAPZ the ONLY DUMBASS I know that POSTS HIS VERSE then GOTTA EXPLAIN WHAT IT WAS /


4) L a POTHEAD so I'm RIPPIN' & BURNIN THIS HERB's spit...CAPZ A VIRGIN, This PUSSY 'bout to get FIRST RIP & BEAT BLUE like HE TURNED CRIP /
Ya heard bitch, Im ARTICULATE so I'm NOT ONE TO MIX WORDS WITH...& WHO YOU KILLIN' when THERE AINT NOBODY IN YA MURKED LIST?? /


5) IM THE CHAMP, YOU MEXICAN that mean YOU A DIRTY CHALLENGA & YOU AINT GONNA BE THIS CLEAN IN YA LIFE...YOU NOT A FIEND for the MIC, You like to DECORATE YA LINES that mean YOU more of A FASHION QUEEN than A FIGHT /
YOU'd HAVE TO SLAP ME with YA NOTEPAD for me to FEEL ANYTHING THAT YOU WRITE...YA VERSE LEFT, The FORUM DONT BELIEVE that YOU RIGHT cuz the COMMENTS AFTER YA LINES show YOU THE ONLY ONE FEELIN' THE THINGS THAT YOU TYPE / (damn/lol/gyea....lame, get over yaself)

LSD RaBBiT
05-18-2005, 10:16 PM
I've had to delete over 10 freeposts from this thread. Next Person to freepost is going to be banned.

Gh0$T
05-18-2005, 10:39 PM
Consistency/Structure:capz (this is a gay catagory)
Creativity: Lnino - Just did lol
Enjoyable: Capz - it was easier 2 read
Flow: Capz
Metaphors: L Nino - No contest
Multies: L Nino
Personal: Capz
Punches: L Nino
Vocabulary: L Nino
Wordplay: Capz
Overall: L Nino ...Very Close battle

Capz - You Are Gonna Bring a Very Strong Contender on this site. My Best Line From You Was
"Ima Show Dis Nino Whoz Boss N 'Payin Fans' Still Wouldnt Give U Any Applause!``
``Mann U Know Ur Feelin 'Defeat' Cuz Ur 'First Initial' Ta Ya 'Name' Is Even A Loss!!`` "

L Nino- You Came Back Strong...Dont Expect Any Worse From You Your One Of The most consistant battlers and up~and~coming keep it up

Best Line "HE STILL A MINOR but UNDERAGE BITCHES always get PLAY IN THE CLUB, Did HIS RESEARCH ON ME to see what HE AINT CAPABLE OF...I'm BUSTIN' CAPZ & I aint talkin' 'bout BLAZIN' A SLUG or SPRAYIN' THIS BUG /
COVERIN' YASELF IN BEES only way YOU MAKIN' A BUZZ, YA VERSE WACK I aint YA CHICK so I AINT FAKIN' IT cuz ....CAPZ the ONLY DUMBASS I know that POSTS HIS VERSE then GOTTA EXPLAIN WHAT IT WAS /"

CapZ
05-18-2005, 10:44 PM
ight 0-1 uppin but multies?? ummm i get dat EZ... punches should've been tie but it's ight


VOTE UP!


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L_Nino
05-18-2005, 11:16 PM
CapZ got personal? Not more than mines but w/e s'all good...

Uppin'..

CapZ
05-19-2005, 03:16 AM
lol sure^^


Vote up!!

Ya know whats up famz



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L_Nino
05-19-2005, 01:16 PM
Fag^^^

lol sure^^

Would you like me to count 'em all out for you?...


Or should I jus' leave explainations for every bar like you do?...


:D



Uppin'...

chappy
05-19-2005, 01:58 PM
Consistency/Structure: C
Creativity: L
Enjoyable: L
Flow: C
Metaphors: L
Multies: L
Personal: L
Punches: L
Vocabulary: L
Wordplay: L
Overall: L Nino

Syze
05-19-2005, 02:15 PM
Capz:

i]"``Ima Show Dis Nino Whoz Boss N 'Payin Fans' Still Wouldnt Give U Any Applause!``
``Mann U Know Ur Feelin 'Defeat' Cuz Ur 'First Initial' Ta Ya 'Name' Is Even A Loss!!`` 1 Gyea"[/i]

^I see what you were tryna do but it was a pretty weak punch.

"``Son I Never Even Heard Of U?? Maybe Cuz I Dont Listen-Ta-Wacks!!``
``Dis Idiot Prolly Already 'Droped His Verse' But Yo U Miss-In-Ya-Raps!!`` 2 Damn.."

^Nice rhyming, no great punch.

"``L Stop Actin 'Frutiy' Cuz Mann I Aint U So I Dont Do Dat Gay-Shid``[Shit]
``N Faggot..Why U Lyin? Ur An 'Adult' Why Ur 'Named' As "A-Kid?!!" 3 LOL"

^Okay.

"``Ya Most Likly Want Ta Jus 'General Chat Wit Me' But Fuk Dat I Rether-Battle!`` [Rather]
``N Last Time I Checked 'L Nino' Was Only 'Showin' On Da Weather-Channel!!`` 4 damn"

^Pretty good, shoulda done somethin' about him sunnin' you...

"``Imaa Bout Ta Kill Dis Nino Cuz Ma 'Deadly' 'Thoughtz' Be So "Murder-Minded"
``N Shit C'in Ya 'Battles' Ur 'Bars R Stretched' Cuz U Want Ta Further-Rhyme-It!!`` 5 O Shit"

^Decent closer. You ahve nice rhymes but you need to come harder with your punches.

L Nino:

"1) I BEEN SHOT & that was the only time I thought CAPZ WAS HOT...CapZ raps is not, COCKY? Yeah HE TALKIN' BIG but thats only when the CAPS is LOCKed /
YOU NOT DOPE, Holdin' a TACO IN YA HAND only way YA WRAPS IS HOT...YOU REALLY SEE CAPZ when YA PUNK ASS GET POPPED, Niggas think YOU HAD PARKINSONS but its jus' that CAPZ IN SHOCK /"

^Yeah!

"2) Do you like a GUNSHOT WOUND to YA HEAD & BLOW YA MIND so YOU in SUDDEN DEATH like it's OVERTIME...Never PLAYED THE FIELD jus' RODE THE PINE, Forum wouldn't HAVE YA BACK even if I THROW YA SPINE /
IVAN, YA VERSE NOT EXCITIN', Why use EXCLAIMATION POINTS (!!) when YOU GOT BORIN' RHYMES?....Atleast YOU DIDNT GO OVER THE BAR LIMIT & Im surprised, Cuz MOST OF YA PEOPLE known for GOIN' OVER LINES / (crossin' the border)"

^Holy shit!

"3) HE STILL A MINOR but UNDERAGE BITCHES always get PLAY IN THE CLUB, Did HIS RESEARCH ON ME to see what HE AINT CAPABLE OF...I'm BUSTIN' CAPZ & I aint talkin' 'bout BLAZIN' A SLUG or SPRAYIN' THIS BUG /
COVERIN' YASELF IN BEES only way YOU MAKIN' A BUZZ, YA VERSE WACK I aint YA CHICK so I AINT FAKIN' IT cuz ....CAPZ the ONLY DUMBASS I know that POSTS HIS VERSE then GOTTA EXPLAIN WHAT IT WAS /"

^LMAO!

"4) L a POTHEAD so I'm RIPPIN' & BURNIN THIS HERB's spit...CAPZ A VIRGIN, This PUSSY 'bout to get FIRST RIP & BEAT BLUE like HE TURNED CRIP /
Ya heard bitch, Im ARTICULATE so I'm NOT ONE TO MIX WORDS WITH...& WHO YOU KILLIN' when THERE AINT NOBODY IN YA MURKED LIST?? /£

^Crip line was nice...

"5) IM THE CHAMP, YOU MEXICAN that mean YOU A DIRTY CHALLENGA & YOU AINT GONNA BE THIS CLEAN IN YA LIFE...YOU NOT A FIEND for the MIC, You like to DECORATE YA LINES that mean YOU more of A FASHION QUEEN than A FIGHT /
YOU'd HAVE TO SLAP ME with YA NOTEPAD for me to FEEL ANYTHING THAT YOU WRITE...YA VERSE LEFT, The FORUM DONT BELIEVE that YOU RIGHT cuz the COMMENTS AFTER YA LINES show YOU THE ONLY ONE FEELIN' THE THINGS THAT YOU TYPE / (damn/lol/gyea....lame, get over yaself)"

^Fuck...

Capz you're pretty nice man but this the best I've seen from L:

Vote - L

Potent
05-19-2005, 02:30 PM
L's verse was HOT

Hu sed Capz won on personals?

My vote goes to L - do i hav 2 type it out?


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CapZ
05-19-2005, 02:38 PM
ight ko... Mad respect den,lol i guess i'll do ma structure like his,lol in other sites dat why i put ma structure like dat, but i do feel like spitin another atleast an extra Bar,lol it's kool



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L_Nino
05-19-2005, 05:54 PM
i guess i'll do ma structure like his

NO, Get ya own :D


Lookin' at ya new battle, I see you took my verse into consideration....(ex: "CAPZ the ONLY DUMBASS I know that POSTS HIS VERSE then GOTTA EXPLAIN WHAT IT WAS")





VOTERS: Thanx....

-Unfaded-
05-22-2005, 01:33 AM
Consistency/Structure: C
Creativity: L
Enjoyable: L
Flow: C
Metaphors: L
Multies: L
Personal: L
Punches: L
Vocabulary: L
Wordplay: L
Overall: L Nino

Inevitable
05-22-2005, 07:37 PM
L Nino wins 4-0 KO.

*CLOSED