Twisted Illusion V.S. BlackShark (0-3 KO)

[Twisted Illusion]

Like you wanted.

5 bars
ne 1 can vote but Categorizes fa votin. first ta 3 votes wins.

[Twisted Illusion]

my links

http://forum.eminem.net/showthread.php?p=124947#post124947
http://forum.eminem.net/showthread.php?p=124949#post124949

[Twisted Illusion]

These folks like Ab ain't hard they yellow like New York cabs
I'll have ya walking around with ya head wraped like arabs,
I'm bout to beat this KID somebody please call CPS please!
I wouldn't FEEL ya if you was a licking *Lesbian* who wears prada!
Trust me I'll have ya body jumping like a hyper kid with ADD
Then break ya collar bone in half like Osbourne on an ATV!
You could be taking Steroids and a can full of Popeyes Spinach
You still could fuck with me I'll do curtain call on ya ass ya finished
Your punch lines are stupid bitches, I don't LIKE em till I'm HIGH
And ya *Baloney Pop* is gonna be like a fish out of water... DRRRYY

Here ma 5 barz friend.

[BlackShark]

LMAO^^^^lemme get links then ill spit

[BlackShark]

http://forum.eminem.net/showthread.php?p=125248#post125248
http://forum.eminem.net/showthread.php?p=125249#post125249

I have a ~Will-with-a-Semi~, You gotta gun but the ~Shell-is-fully-Empty~
Came to this site to blow everyone away and claim the ~Devil-has-sent-Me~
Fuck it this is a death threat, you gonna ~Miss-this-and-choke~
How the fuck you gonna talk shit ~with-a-slit-throat~
I gotcha ~feared-and-thrashed~ Have your head ~teared-and-bashed~
Imma have you~hear-half-assed~ and cut your ~ears-in-half~
Beat you in the first ~six-lines~ just for kicks i ~mix-spines~
Got this kid lost knowing nothing...back up faggot this ~dicks-mine~
You gotta gat in your belt but mines in your mouth rady to go splat
Little bitch my street is thirsty spreading "young blood" with a "dot" in ya hat


just a quickie vote up

[BlackShark]

Vote Up

[HUSTLAX4]

botth average

[BlackShark]

STFU...WTF 2 DAYS AND NO VOTES :mad: :mad:

[chappy]

Consistency/Structure: Both
Creativity: BS
Enjoyable: Both
Flow: BS
Metaphors: nah...
Multies: BS
Personal: TI
Punches: TI
Vocabulary: BS
Wordplay: BS
Overall: BlackShark

[Lyricologist_RiCo]

Creativity: Twisted
Enjoyable: Black
Flow: Black
Metaphors:Neither
Multies: Black
Personal:Neither
Punches: Black
Vocabulary: Neither
Wordplay: Neither


Overall: Black

[TzVe Em]

Consistency/Structure: BS
Creativity: BS
Enjoyable: Twisted
Flow: BS
Metaphors: ok
Multies: BS
Personal: TWISTED
Punches: TWISTED
Vocabulary: BS
Wordplay: BS
Overall: BlackShark hurrah

[Twisted Illusion]

BlackShark wun, Nice battle, guess i need sum more wordplay to get at ya next time.

[BlackShark]

yea nice battle...close this...3-0 KO