WHIZZ vs. RAIDER (0-4 KO)

[WHIZZY]

okay Raider I set it, im gonna drop and Im really off, need practice so if we can lets do this 2x, but really may the best BIATCH WIN!!!

20 BARS MAX
no hate/crew votes
first one to 5 wins
3-0 = KO
no pre-written verses
no bitting


Raider your lines stank like the crotch of an obese bitch
in 100 degree heat with a nasty yeast itch, so peep this..........................

ME, im so damn hot I can still smoke ya ass afta ya deceased, ya aint no WINNER

Roll ya punk ass up in a zig-zag and puff ya as a lil before meal PINNER

Raider I rip shit like ya ass does afta a nice Christmas Eve DINNER

Shit I can Switch Hit in a quick instant, from a SOLDIER OF GOD

to an EARTHLY Satanic Foul Mouthed SINNER,
SO DON’T TEST ME BITCH, not really somethin to
CONSIDER

cuz WHIZZ IS AN ANGELIC THUG DEMON, YEAH!!
thats really WHATS IN HER

Besides Raider you aint got a chance, so at a GLANCE in sayin KKZ you all DUMB
RAIDER you’re EVEN DUMBER!!!

To battle me, in the SUMMER, this is gonna be a BUMMER
THAT IS>.............................Metaphorically SPEAKING

CUZ bitch I spit so hard you see me BREATHING,
like when ya words turn to fog, outside cuz its fuckin FREEZING

See I can Pimp, and Play any DAMN METAPHOR
like were havin an extra marital affair, I call him my METAPHORICAL WHORE

Then in the end its just me and the FIGURE Of SPEECH I ADORE
RAIDER you’re the ONE gettin cheated on, CUZ you suck AND YOUR FLOWS ARE A BORE

HIP HOP ANNAULMENT, THE FELLIN JUST AINT THERE ANYMORE

Now with my magic wand, POOF< POOF and I SAY RAIDER is OFFICIALLY DISS_MISSED
but if ya real silent, you can still here his cries

sounds like me afta I didnt get everything
on my 6ft Christmas GIFT LIST

So it seems like the only option for you, is to be reincarnated as a SPONGE
come and suck up my SKILLZ, and you know, ABSORB ME

SIKE, im too quick, Already named ya BOB and sent ya to a PINEAPPLE HOUSE SOMEWHERE FAR, FAR UNDER YOUR SEA

The real scary part is my MOM, DAD and OBGYN all tried to ABORT ME

BUT when it FAILED They agreed at my funeral to chop me up like COCAINE and ............................................\
PARTY FOR DAYS<
While My lOVED ONES SMOKE< SNIFF AND SNORT ME

[WHIZZY]

close this thread or whichever RAIDER DOES'NT DROP IN..we both actually dropped threads at the EXACT SAME TIME JINX owe me a ????????

[raider]

Dint yuh know raider is wicked...yur juss bold kid, yah written shit is hopeless...
Cuz raider equipped wit da most viscious-n-coldest scripts on tha globe bitch!
listen…im FOCUSED mah diction is so sick…fuckin syphilis-quates-this!!
WHIZZY dont ‘stand’ a chance in dis.. like ‘crippled-aerobics’!!!
face-to-face, WHIZZY is like 'Church Dinner'… she gonna get 'ate'-wit-'grace'
she resembles 'belts on astronaut suits'... she just a fuckkin 'waist'-of-'space'
My heat's hittin targets…Imma ‘dispose’ of her…cuz all she-spits-is-garbage!!
I can neva see this bitch start shit…Cant seem to handle her ‘beef’ lookin like an obese-Ricky-Martin!!
Yah scriptz erelevant to fit my characteristics…raider spits-intelligent
Just skip the jealousness, all ‘beef aside’ WHIZZY couldn’t ‘pick a bone’ wit me if she waz an archeoligist-skeleton
WHIZZY is practicin' nonsense, wit axes-N-gauntletz, raider quick to fracture-your-sockets
Quit rappin...you lost it, you cant see me… but you might catch a 'glimpse' of raider if you captured-my-opticz!
Ya paragraphs show tha lack-of-your-logic, but back-to-my-concept...
You need to hold ya spitz back `round me like retractable-vomit
Call raider a hare cuz I'm bout ta rip-this-snail…leavin yah tits-impaled
My chances of victory are like your ‘weight’… dey tip-tha-scale
My progressive loops drop like your digested food in restroom-stallz
I infest this fool and end this duel ranked higher than your cholesteral
raider shred your extrematies, readily send-you-to-heaven-see
Face it ol` timer… I can classify you like 'disco'…no one been feelin you since tha 'end-of-the-seventies'!!!
I went aftah your age… I went after your size… Have WHIZZY wanna hide… inna mask-or-disguise
All are too small... none of em fit, so I laugh-and-reply
Battle raider? your having-to-ride, I asked half of these guyz and they said you "eat more head" than african-tribes
Uh oh… raider in trouble…this gurls snappin, I see yah knees buckle-from-sly-rappin
Talk about winning? this should count as 'two in a rowe' like 'couples-gone-cayakin'
When i came near…your best fell, cuz your fear-scorched-text…well
raider didnt steal your ‘cell phone’, but 'here's-your-next'el'!!!

[raider]

votes peepz

[L_Nino]

When i came near…your best fell, cuz your fear-scorched-text…well
raider didnt steal your ‘cell phone’, but 'here's-your-next'el'!!!

Oh yea!! :cool:

[raider]

can we get a vote plez

http://forum.eminem.net/showthread.php?t=10398&page=2

http://forum.eminem.net/showthread.php?t=10345

[Twisted Illusion]

Raider man, ya spit was the best i seen in long time, nah, just playin. Ya rhymes and flow was betta than whizzy. Nuttin gainst ya Whizzy. Just i couldn't read ya spit without stoppin at every lines end. And ya'll need better time, cause 20 barz is too much. Sumthin like 10 bars (20 lines) Raider i know you could still take whiz either way. So hope ya win this man.

[L_Nino]

WHIZZY:

Raider your lines stank like the crotch of an obese bitch
in 100 degree heat with a nasty yeast itch, so peep this..........................

^^^ Flow was the best thing in this bar...

ME, im so damn hot I can still smoke ya ass afta ya deceased, ya aint no WINNER
Roll ya punk ass up in a zig-zag and puff ya as a lil before meal PINNER

^^^ Ehhhh...

Raider I rip shit like ya ass does afta a nice Christmas Eve DINNER
Shit I can Switch Hit in a quick instant, from a SOLDIER OF GOD
to an EARTHLY Satanic Foul Mouthed SINNER,

^^^ Nuthin' special here...

SO DON’T TEST ME BITCH, not really somethin to
CONSIDER
cuz WHIZZ IS AN ANGELIC THUG DEMON, YEAH!!
thats really WHATS IN HER

^^^ Filler...

Besides Raider you aint got a chance, so at a GLANCE in sayin KKZ you all DUMB
RAIDER you’re EVEN DUMBER!!!
To battle me, in the SUMMER, this is gonna be a BUMMER

^^^ Serious??..

THAT IS>.............................Metaphorically SPEAKING
CUZ bitch I spit so hard you see me BREATHING,
like when ya words turn to fog, outside cuz its fuckin FREEZING

^^^ Not feelin' this set....

See I can Pimp, and Play any DAMN METAPHOR
like were havin an extra marital affair, I call him my METAPHORICAL WHORE

Then in the end its just me and the FIGURE Of SPEECH I ADORE
RAIDER you’re the ONE gettin cheated on, CUZ you suck AND YOUR FLOWS ARE A BORE
HIP HOP ANNAULMENT, THE FELLIN JUST AINT THERE ANYMORE

^^^ Last line was the only good part out this set...Seems you jus' freestylin' but not throwin' punches at ya opponent...

Now with my magic wand, POOF< POOF and I SAY RAIDER is OFFICIALLY DISS_MISSED
but if ya real silent, you can still here his cries
sounds like me afta I didnt get everything
on my 6ft Christmas GIFT LIST

^^^ Dont diss yaself in ya own battle verse....This aint 8Mile..

So it seems like the only option for you, is to be reincarnated as a SPONGE
come and suck up my SKILLZ, and you know, ABSORB ME
SIKE, im too quick, Already named ya BOB and sent ya to a PINEAPPLE HOUSE SOMEWHERE FAR, FAR UNDER YOUR SEA
The real scary part is my MOM, DAD and OBGYN all tried to ABORT ME
BUT when it FAILED They agreed at my funeral to chop me up like COCAINE and ............................................\
PARTY FOR DAYS<
While My lOVED ONES SMOKE< SNIFF AND SNORT ME

^^^ Ok ender...But still not hittin' ya opponent...




RAIDER:

Dint yuh know raider is wicked...yur juss bold kid, yah written shit is hopeless...
Cuz raider equipped wit da most viscious-n-coldest scripts on tha globe bitch!

^^^ Filler....

listen…im FOCUSED mah diction is so sick…fuckin syphilis-quates-this!!
WHIZZY dont ‘stand’ a chance in dis.. like ‘crippled-aerobics’!!!

^^^ Nice...

face-to-face, WHIZZY is like 'Church Dinner'… she gonna get 'ate'-wit-'grace'
she resembles 'belts on astronaut suits'... she just a fuckkin 'waist'-of-'space'

^^^ :) ....

My heat's hittin targets…Imma ‘dispose’ of her…cuz all she-spits-is-garbage!!
I can neva see this bitch start shit…Cant seem to handle her ‘beef’ lookin like an obese-Ricky-Martin!!

^^^ Not feelin' this...

Yah scriptz erelevant to fit my characteristics…raider spits-intelligent
Just skip the jealousness, all ‘beef aside’ WHIZZY couldn’t ‘pick a bone’ wit me if she waz an archeoligist-skeleton

^^^ Nice...

WHIZZY is practicin' nonsense, wit axes-N-gauntletz, raider quick to fracture-your-sockets
Quit rappin...you lost it, you cant see me… but you might catch a 'glimpse' of raider if you captured-my-opticz!

^^^ So so...

Ya paragraphs show tha lack-of-your-logic, but back-to-my-concept...
You need to hold ya spitz back `round me like retractable-vomit

^^^ Ok...

Call raider a hare cuz I'm bout ta rip-this-snail…leavin yah tits-impaled
My chances of victory are like your ‘weight’… dey tip-tha-scale

^^^ Damn...

My progressive loops drop like your digested food in restroom-stallz
I infest this fool and end this duel ranked higher than your cholesteral

^^^ Aight...

raider shred your extrematies, readily send-you-to-heaven-see
Face it ol` timer… I can classify you like 'disco'…no one been feelin you since tha 'end-of-the-seventies'!!!

^^^ Damn...Nice personal...

I went aftah your age… I went after your size… Have WHIZZY wanna hide… inna mask-or-disguise
All are too small... none of em fit, so I laugh-and-reply
Battle raider? your having-to-ride, I asked half of these guyz and they said you "eat more head" than african-tribes

^^^ Koo...

Uh oh… raider in trouble…this gurls snappin, I see yah knees buckle-from-sly-rappin
Talk about winning? this should count as 'two in a rowe' like 'couples-gone-cayakin'

^^^ Nice....

When i came near…your best fell, cuz your fear-scorched-text…well
raider didnt steal your ‘cell phone’, but 'here's-your-next'el'!!!

^^^ WHOA!!....Dope ender...


Consistency/Structure: R
Creativity: R
Enjoyable: R
Flow: R
Metaphors: R
Multies: R
Personal: R
Punches: R
Vocabulary: R
Wordplay: R
Overall: Raider


VOTE: RAIDER

[BlackShark]

Consistency/Structure: R
Creativity: R
Enjoyable: R
Flow: R
Metaphors: R
Multies: R
Personal: R
Punches: R
Vocabulary: R
Wordplay: R
Overall: Raider


VOTE: RAIDER

[HUSTLAX4]

raider got diss 1 fuck explaining

[CapZ]

All cats Tu Raider...


INTRO/OUTRO- R
PUNCHES-R
PERSONALS-R
MULTIES-R
MET'S-R
VOCABULARY-TIE
CREATIVE-TIE
WORDPLAY-R
ENJOYED-R
TRYIN- W,LOL J/K

BUT YE RAIDER JUS CAME WAY HARDER DEN U


`1`

[RJB.]

raider got diss 1 fuck explaining
i thought he was wak and only do pussy battlin

[mako]

Consistency/Structure: R
Creativity: R
Enjoyable: R
Flow: R
Metaphors:R
Multies: R
Personal: R
Punches: R
Vocabulary: R
Wordplay: R
Overall: Raider

[Inevitable]

Raider wins this 4-0 KO, next time there wont be a battle unless I get 2 links from both battlers.

*CLOSED