falix vs. raider

[raider]

unlimited bars
no crew or hate votes
check in fal

ill spit afterschool

[Falix]

linx
http://forum.eminem.net/showthread.php?t=10256 http://forum.eminem.net/showthread.php?t=10157

Kondemed Kriminal huh? your only fourteen
the worst thing you probably ever done was not keepin your room clean

was that cold? cuz my intensions are to hurt ur feelings
i wanna cripple your existence like earthquakes caveing in ceilings

your fame on a scale of height, is equivialnt to an elf
if u battled eminem no one would notice you and think he was battling himself

thats speaks for itself, and i dont need applause
i dont feel like i beat anyone special when the opponent wears bra's

thongs and white pants that are transparent
appearently hes a tranvest. whats wrong with the parents

its bad enough that you live in the states, but why New Jersey
i heard the women like to bow, and the men like to curtsey

i musta struck a nerve cuz u standin there stiff for goodness sake
you look like a statue, please could you atleast move or shake

well ya'll move now when i spot ur bitch, run up and RAID 'ER
spit any diss u want, im the lyricist evader

ur a migdet, im taller, ur a cent, im a dollar
carnifourious crawler, dishin out suplexs like Jerry the king Lawler (wrestler)

you dont deserve to rap if correctly, i remember
this kid thot the crip walk was a marathon for gang members

my disses are funnier then a Late Night with Cohan (comedy show in canada)
disposing you more then the breasts on lindsay lohan

imma rap until this keyboard fucks up or malfunctions
by then u'll probably develop some kind of dysfuction

i should travel back in time and shove a cork in ur moms uterus
cuz shit is wack and no one should ever have to go threw this

ur a felion,im goin to ejaculate so consider urself smitten (Felion-another name for cat)
cuz i heard "everytime u masterbate god kills a kitten

[Falix]

everytime u masterbate god kills a kitten- funny pic i seen on internet, some wierd fuzzy brown thing chasing a kitten and in text on the pic it says "everytime you masterbate god kills a kitten"

[L_Nino]

you dont deserve to rap if correctly, i remember
this kid thot the crip walk was a marathon for gang members


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[raider]

sorry it took so long. i know ur gettin antsy

Got this Canadian bitch ‘ATTACKIN-MUH-SCRIPT’ aye?...
Its like cheap tissues, the way my sick spits will easily rip this Jay....
When u gonna learn that ‘testin’ raider'll get ya crossed out?...
Fuck it, soon as u start bussin I’m ‘rushin’ u like Mos-cow…
Got me feelin lost - ya ‘linez just don’t connect’ like misdialed digits…
Check it: this dude don’t post text - he posts hieroglyphics…
Its time to face facts dawg, ya fallin off and the truth hurts…
Ya ass rapz’ve ‘lost touch’ like altar boyz when they quit church…
Now raider whoopin ya ass till its blacker than the bitch that sang Fast Car…
My Jamz next yurs are the Most Def like Russel Simmons or Black Star…
The way I stack barz got me feelin higher than new Islamic converts on Shalom…
Cuz tommorow u gonna talk about how bad I served u in ya highlights column…
He all depressed and solemn… cuz I’m the champion, raider iz unbeatable…
Can’t shake me, I’ll eat u for breakfast cuz ya text iz flaky like Wheatables…
Like weather that’s unseasonable – u don’t know how to dress…
Not for battle and add that to the fact that ya sexual identity iz a mess…
Stickin lyrical knives in ya chest – u can ‘feel my vibe’ like Young Buck…
Shoulda never let me in, I rhyme sick like fat dykes that tongue fuck…
Another dumb fuck Canadian frontin, doin more actin then Taye Diggs…
The fuck iz 'Falix'? Wuz Biggie gay and he fucked Fal and they had kids?!...
Ya played like gun to lead pencil references or stenciled messages in the restroom…
Ya whack ‘rapz’ are ass like toga sheetz, they ‘blow’ like Johnny Depp do…
My text iz leavin u bent like yoga instructors when they get that ass tapped…
And this verse iz turnin out like one of L NIno's linez: in the end u gettin capped…


linx ccomin lata

[WHIZZY]

DAMN, its a lil close so im not sure if you will agree, I really need much battle practice readin, votin, battlin, but jus bear with me through this rusty stage.....

Consistency/Structure: falix
Creativity: raider but really close
Enjoyable: falix
Flow: falix, I just feel raider forces sometimes
Metaphors: raider - this one was so dope, I think it is a step past a metaphore, i mean the first part......
Ya played like gun to lead pencil references or stenciled messages in the restroom…
Ya whack ‘rapz’ are ass like toga sheetz, they ‘blow’ like Johnny Depp do…
Multies: raider
Personal: equal
Punches: raider
Vocabulary: raider
Wordplay: raider
Overall: Raider

[raider]

votsz lets end this rematch

[Inevitable]

No links, no battle.

*CLOSED