Syze vs. Bakkie

[Syze]

5 bars
Anyone can vote but must explain votes VERY thoroughly
3-0 KO
First to 5 otherwise

[Syze]

Everybody cover your noses cuz this 'ass-is-gonna-spit',
Only "trophy" your rhymes ever earned you had a "catas"-in-front-of-it'// (catastrophe)
Man you're so whipped ya might as well 'start-givin-a-hoe-pay',
And you couldn't drop unexpectedly if you were 'Marc-Vivien-Foe'*//
How you think you can match the kid with the most 'original-niceness'?
Shit, I'm the best thing since bread cut into 'individual-slices'**//
You're the "fairy" here but I'm the one that's 'stealin-your-teeth'***,
My 'cock-in-your-mouth' after 'knockin-em-out', how you gonna 'deal-with-beef'?****//
You're 'feelin-relief' cuz I'm 'finished - I've-just-beaten-this-failure',
And my rhymes are stronger than 'spinach-bein'-eaten-by-sailors'*****//

*Football (soccer) player that dropped dead during a game
**I'm the best thing since sliced bread!
***I'm knocking them out but your the fairy/gay (tooth fairy)
****You can't deal with beef if you have no teeth!
*****Popeye reference, if youi don't get it, or any of my punches, you're too stupid to vote

[Bakkie]

You need to eject your nose and dispose coz you sniffed my display,
Claiming your not gay your in the I.R.A it's obvious no need for an X-ray,*

My rhymes are super supreme i dont need to redeem coz i keep shit clean,
I polish shit wid Mr.Sheen straighten up things that lean and wip you like cream,

This battle is between Chatholic's and Protestant England rule were on top,**
Your country are full of giuness drinking dumb fuck's robbin a charity shop,

This verse is going to take full control of the universe and thats no suprise,
You spat first but your coming off worse like superman calling himself super syze,

Fuck sliceing bread im guna get my knife and slice your throat in stead,
ima recycle my teeth like your rhymes wid the DZK line on another thread.***

Who Dont Know
*I.R.A are a terrorist kinda group fighting for republic of ireland and northern to be one country and not apart of United Kingdom sumat like that.
**IRA are chatholics and england are protestants some are anyway.
Guiness is a drink that irish people drink and irish people are nown for being dumb and not very smart.
***he has been accused of recycling on another thread.

http://forum.eminem.net/showthread.php?t=10192
http://forum.eminem.net/showthread.php?t=10361

[WHIZZY]

Consistency/Structure: SYZE
Creativity: LEANIN MORE TO SYZE JUST MORE COMPLEX
Enjoyable: SYZE
Flow: SYZE
Metaphors: SYZE
Multies: BAKKIE
Personal: EQUAL
Punches: EQUAL
Vocabulary: SYZE
Wordplay: SYZE
Overall: SYZE

[OMC Bonez]

Syze

Everybody cover your noses cuz this 'ass-is-gonna-spit',
Only "trophy" your rhymes ever earned you had a "catas"-in-front-of-it' (catastrophe)

Nice Line, Good opener

Man you're so whipped ya might as well 'start-givin-a-hoe-pay',
And you couldn't drop unexpectedly if you were 'Marc-Vivien-Foe'

didnt care much for this line

How you think you can match the kid with the most 'original-niceness'?
Shit, I'm the best thing since bread cut into 'individual-slices

pretty weak

You're the "fairy" here but I'm the one that's 'stealin-your-teeth'
My 'cock-in-your-mouth' after 'knockin-em-out', how you gonna 'deal-with-beef'?

Its alright

You're 'feelin-relief' cuz I'm 'finished - I've-just-beaten-this-failure',
And my rhymes are stronger than 'spinach-bein'-eaten-by-sailors'

Its a good line, but not a good finisher

Bakkie

You need to eject your nose and dispose coz you sniffed my display,
Claiming your not gay your in the I.R.A it's obvious no need for an X-ray,*

haha, i like this line

My rhymes are super supreme i dont need to redeem coz i keep shit clean,
I polish shit wid Mr.Sheen straighten up things that lean and wip you like cream,

ok

This battle is between Chatholic's and Protestant England rule were on top,**
Your country are full of giuness drinking dumb fuck's robbin a charity shop,

I have notice people from the UK or england used that word "dumbfuck" a lot lately, either way i think this line is played

This verse is going to take full control of the universe and thats no suprise,
You spat first but your coming off worse like superman calling himself super syze,

Ok Line

Fuck sliceing bread im guna get my knife and slice your throat in stead,
ima recycle my teeth like your rhymes wid the DZK line on another thread

Didnt like the line, not really of a good finisher


Vote:Bakkie
I gave this to him because it seems like he gave stronger punches that made me laugh personally. Syze you had a pretty good opener but it sound like you were slacking as you went a long and picked your self backed up during your verse. So I'll give that much. In the end you guys did a good job, but I expected more.

[CapZ]

Intro/outro: Tie
Puches: B
Personals: B
Creativity: Tie both was ight
Enjoyed: B's Verse Got me
Flow: S
Vocabulary: Tie ehhh
Multies: B
Met's: S
Wordplay: Tie

Overall: Bak Took Dis betta PuNChez N Personals EZ

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[Killa Jones]

Consistency/Structure: SYZE
Creativity: SYZE
Enjoyable: SYZE
Flow: SYZE
Metaphors: SYZE
Multies: BAKKIE
Personal: ?
Punches: SYZE
Vocabulary: SYZE
Wordplay: SYZE
Overall: SYZE

Syze man i read your verse and laughed all the way threw, it was comical and i thought there were a few decent bars in there, you had more intelligence to your flow than bakkie did aswell. Hands down. Good Drop

Fav Bar:
How you think you can match the kid with the most 'original-niceness'?
Shit, I'm the best thing since bread cut into 'individual-slices'**//

[L_Nino]

SYZE:

Everybody cover your noses cuz this 'ass-is-gonna-spit',
Only "trophy" your rhymes ever earned you had a "catas"-in-front-of-it' (catastrophe)

^^^ Dope...Nice opener..

Man you're so whipped ya might as well 'start-givin-a-hoe-pay',
And you couldn't drop unexpectedly if you were 'Marc-Vivien-Foe'

^^^ Decent...

How you think you can match the kid with the most 'original-niceness'?
Shit, I'm the best thing since bread cut into 'individual-slices

^^^ Diggin' this set...

You're the "fairy" here but I'm the one that's 'stealin-your-teeth'
My 'cock-in-your-mouth' after 'knockin-em-out', how you gonna 'deal-with-beef'?

^^^ Nice...

You're 'feelin-relief' cuz I'm 'finished - I've-just-beaten-this-failure',
And my rhymes are stronger than 'spinach-bein'-eaten-by-sailors'

^^^ Aight bar...Ok ender...



BAKKIE:

You need to eject your nose and dispose coz you sniffed my display,
Claiming your not gay your in the I.R.A it's obvious no need for an X-ray,*

^^^ ???...

My rhymes are super supreme i dont need to redeem coz i keep shit clean,
I polish shit wid Mr.Sheen straighten up things that lean and wip you like cream,

^^^ Didnt get ya first line (i dont need to redeem coz i keep shit clean..???)...2nd line was koo...

This battle is between Chatholic's and Protestant England rule were on top,**
Your country are full of giuness drinking dumb fuck's robbin a charity shop,

^^^ Ehhhh...

This verse is going to take full control of the universe and thats no suprise,
You spat first but your coming off worse like superman calling himself super syze,

^^^ Made no sense to me homie...

Fuck sliceing bread im guna get my knife and slice your throat in stead,
ima recycle my teeth like your rhymes wid the DZK line on another thread

^^^ Feeding...Last half of ya 2nd line was a nice personal...



Consistency/Structure: S
Creativity: S
Enjoyable: S
Flow: TIE
Metaphors: S
Multies: S
Personal: B
Punches: S
Vocabulary: S
Wordplay: S
Overall: Syze


VOTE: SYZE....count it if ya want but he had this hands down...

[TzVe Em]

Consistency/Structure: BAIKKI
Creativity: BAKKI
Enjoyable: BAKKI
Flow: BAKKIE
Metaphors: BAKKIE
Multies: BAKKIE
Personal: BAKKIE
Punches: BAKKIE
Vocabulary: BAKKIE
Wordplay: BAKKIE
Overall: BAKKIE

to me, bakkie raped u, sry but his spit overrated urs :D

[slimshadyLP]

Consistency/Structure: bakkie
Creativity: syze
Enjoyable: tie
Flow: syze
Metaphors: syze
Multies: bakkie
Personal: tie
Punches: tie
Vocabulary: tie
Wordplay: syze
Overall: Syze wins. good battle guys.

[Inevitable]

*OPEN, so Syze can post his 2 links, no votes will count until he has done so.

[Inevitable]

Ive had to delete 67 freeposts in this battle. There will be no more freeposting in this thread. NO ONE POST UNTIL SYZE HAS POSTED HIS LINKS, AND AFTER IF YOU POST IT SHOULD BE A VOTE OR IT WILL BE DELETED.

[Syze]

Haha, you're desperate man, I'll post my links...