Potent vs. L Nino (1-5)

[Potent]

Alryt 6 Bar max, verse due a.s.a.p. I drop 1st
first to 5 or 3-0 is a K.O
No Feeding
No crew/h8 votes

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[Potent]

http://forum.eminem.net/showthread.php?p=122519#post122519
http://forum.eminem.net/showthread.php?p=122520#post122520


Whats all this, go look at your structure, tryna fit 2 bars into 1
Learn that from your gal, had to use 2 fingures coz your little dick couldn’t make her cum//
when Syze entered the forum, thas when you magically “Got Hot”
Not only coz he was ghost writing 4 you, but coz his picture made ur dick “Rise Up”//
You must work in “Wendy’s” coz when theres beef your always involved
Maybe you used to work in Wendy’s, but you couldn’t serve shit, yeh Problem solved//
Your PERSONALS are not-existant, mine are true and on the DOT
My verse is like a shot in the mouth, it’l draw blood. spit and thas the only chance you verse has of being “RED-HOT”//
As for your rhyming style, you can’t communicate thru lyrics, you use Bold Text
Your rhymes wouldn’t turn heads, even if they was sittin on revolving decks//
Your undefeated although you’ve only battled four, I’ll beat you, send you into denial
L – The next time you will have a “Fat Drop”, is when your obese gal pushes out your Child//

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[L_Nino]

'Bout time...


http://forum.eminem.net/showthread.php?t=10365
http://forum.eminem.net/showthread.php?t=10204



1) YA LINES OLD & PLAYED so how you gon' survive in the NEW AGE??, YOU LAME & YA RHYMES AINT HOT...ADD a teck, SUBTRACT the lead, MULITPLY bloodstains & DIVIDE ya head so YOU EQUAL DEAD when YOU LIE IN A BOX /
But fight or not, Let the cryin' stop, YOU ALREADY SEEN S-M-D TRY & FLOP...Ya team's a DRAG QUEEN SHOW if thats THE GUYS YOU GOT & YALL BITERS, The only OUTLAWZ I heard about used to RIDE WIT' PAC /


2) Massacred MATT so like usin' PENS ON EXAMS theres no sense TRYIN' TO TEST...FIGHT FOR YA LIFE not the best, Cuz YOU the reason AIDS got A-I-D-S/
POTENT UP HIS ASS 24/7, so bathroom breaks only time he rest...Its COMMON for people to SEE THE BITCH IN YOU so I dont a find a threat, Gettin' ya PET OPERATED ON only time YOU GOT TIES WIT' VETS /

3) NEVER WRITTEN, You a Poor Opponent To Even Need To...But there's NO SURVIVORS when EL NINO BREEZE THRU / (*the hurricane/name)
& the forum know that P foo' SOFTER THAN I-V FOOD, BITIN' MY STYLE so he can claim to be LYRICALLY LETHAL...HIM HAVE SKILLS? Something's more FISHY than SEA FOOD but like ONE WAY MIRRORS, YOU NOT SEEIN' ME but PUSSY I CAN SEE YOU /


4) YOU NOT NEO & theres NO MATRIX when I pop shit, Its more like PARALYSIS: YOU CANT DODGE IT...YA VERSE DIARRAHEA, It FALLS APART when ya DROP IT /
Shoulda planned out ya DEFENSE like JOHNNIE COCHRAN cuz L's like RUNAWAY TRAINS: YOU CANT STOP IT...Call POTENT the "BOOGEYMAN" cuz HE's NOT REAL & he's waitin' to COME OUT THE CLOSET/


5) Usin' quotations 'round ya lines but ya "punches" never clever kid & why mention my girl when she irrevelant?...She likes dick cuz SHE's A GIRL but WHAT'S YOUR EXCUSE FOR LOVIN' IT, When YOU WAS ALREADY BORN TO LOVE NUTS like a ELEPHANT /
& YOU USIN' SYZE as an explaination why MY RHYMES BETTER THAN YOURS but HAVE NO EVIDENCE...Im flattered but NO GHOSTWRITERS: NEVER WILL - NEVER DID, YOU SHOULD TRY, Then YOU'd GET SOME BETTER SHIT cuz bein' in VIETNAM only way YOU'd BE A VETERAN /


6) YOU GAYE, I aint MARVIN but LETS GET IT ON, You was on some RODNEY KING shit before but you already know WE ALL JUS' CANT GET ALONG...So CONSIDER A CAREER as a FIRE SWALLOWER since YOU CANT SPIT IT DOG /
& CHANGE YA NAME cuz POTENT's meant to mean strong so YOU GOT IT WRONG...YOU'RE WEAK but now you can really call yaself POTENT cuz YOU JUST GOT SHITTED ON /



Broken down/ Explained votes only plz...


VOTERS: get@me if you need somethin' explained...

[slimshadyLP]

Consistency/Structure: tie
Creativity: tie
Enjoyable: L nino
Flow: tie
Metaphors: tie
Multies: L nino
Personal: tie
Punches: tie
Vocabulary: none really but Potent wins it
Wordplay: tie
Overall: close battle but L nino wins.

She likes dick cuz SHE's A GIRL but WHAT'S YOUR EXCUSE FOR LOVIN' IT, When YOU WAS ALREADY BORN TO LOVE NUTS like a ELEPHANT /
LMAO i luv that line nino.

[Potent]

If you sed broken/explaind votes only - does that count?

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(@ L)

[L_Nino]

If you sed broken/explaind votes only - does that count?

(@ L)


Its explained...But thats on you, count it if you want...

[Potent]

yeh yeh cool 1-0 2 L. uppin' 4 mo votes ppl SAFE

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[L_Nino]

Uppin'..

[LADEN]

Consistency/Structure:NONE
Creativity: NONE
Enjoyable:POTENT
Flow: POTENT
Metaphors:L NINO
Multies: L nino
Personal:POTENT
Punches:L NINO
Vocabulary:POTENT
Wordplay: NONE
Overall:POTENT.

[Syze]

POTENT:

"Whats all this, go look at your structure, tryna fit 2 bars into 1
Learn that from your gal, had to use 2 fingures coz your little dick couldn’t make her cum//

^Decent.

"when Syze entered the forum, thas when you magically “Got Hot”
Not only coz he was ghost writing 4 you, but coz his picture made ur dick “Rise Up”//"

^Poor.

"You must work in “Wendy’s” coz when theres beef your always involved
Maybe you used to work in Wendy’s, but you couldn’t serve shit, yeh Problem solved//"]

^Nice concept.

"Your PERSONALS are not-existant, mine are true and on the DOT
My verse is like a shot in the mouth, it’l draw blood. spit and thas the only chance you verse has of being “RED-HOT”//"

^Nice.

"As for your rhyming style, you can’t communicate thru lyrics, you use Bold Text
Your rhymes wouldn’t turn heads, even if they was sittin on revolving decks//"

^Decent.

"Your undefeated although you’ve only battled four, I’ll beat you, send you into denial
L – The next time you will have a “Fat Drop”, is when your obese gal pushes out your Child//"

^Nice closer.

You have some decent punches your overall problem is your rhyming isn't very impressive.

L NINO:

[I]""Your undefeated although you’ve only battled four, I’ll beat you, send you into denial
L – The next time you will have a “Fat Drop”, is when your obese gal pushes out your Child//"

^Okay.

"2) Massacred MATT so like usin' PENS ON EXAMS theres no sense TRYIN' TO TEST...FIGHT FOR YA LIFE not the best, Cuz YOU the reason AIDS got A-I-D-S/
POTENT UP HIS ASS 24/7, so bathroom breaks only time he rest...Its COMMON for people to SEE THE BITCH IN YOU so I dont a find a threat, Gettin' ya PET OPERATED ON only time YOU GOT TIES WIT' VETS /"

^Nice.

"3) NEVER WRITTEN, You a Poor Opponent To Even Need To...But there's NO SURVIVORS when EL NINO BREEZE THRU / (*the hurricane/name)
& the forum know that P foo' SOFTER THAN I-V FOOD, BITIN' MY STYLE so he can claim to be LYRICALLY LETHAL...HIM HAVE SKILLS? Something's more FISHY than SEA FOOD but like ONE WAY MIRRORS, YOU NOT SEEIN' ME but PUSSY I CAN SEE YOU /"

^Unbelievable punches.

"4) YOU NOT NEO & theres NO MATRIX when I pop shit, Its more like PARALYSIS: YOU CANT DODGE IT...YA VERSE DIARRAHEA, It FALLS APART when ya DROP IT /
Shoulda planned out ya DEFENSE like JOHNNIE COCHRAN cuz L's like RUNAWAY TRAINS: YOU CANT STOP IT...Call POTENT the "BOOGEYMAN" cuz HE's NOT REAL & he's waitin' to COME OUT THE CLOSET/"

^Holy shit!

"5) Usin' quotations 'round ya lines but ya "punches" never clever kid & why mention my girl when she irrevelant?...She likes dick cuz SHE's A GIRL but WHAT'S YOUR EXCUSE FOR LOVIN' IT, When YOU WAS ALREADY BORN TO LOVE NUTS like a ELEPHANT /
& YOU USIN' SYZE as an explaination why MY RHYMES BETTER THAN YOURS but HAVE NO EVIDENCE...Im flattered but NO GHOSTWRITERS: NEVER WILL - NEVER DID, YOU SHOULD TRY, Then YOU'd GET SOME BETTER SHIT cuz bein' in VIETNAM only way YOU'd BE A VETERAN /"

^LMAO at that elephant line.

"6) YOU GAYE, I aint MARVIN but LETS GET IT ON, You was on some RODNEY KING shit before but you already know WE ALL JUS' CANT GET ALONG...So CONSIDER A CAREER as a FIRE SWALLOWER since YOU CANT SPIT IT DOG /
& CHANGE YA NAME cuz POTENT's meant to mean strong so YOU GOT IT WRONG...YOU'RE WEAK but now you can really call yaself POTENT cuz YOU JUST GOT SHITTED ON /"

^Nice closer.

Potent you came pretty hard, best I've seen from you, you'd have beaten 90% of the board with that, 99% even but Nino came with absolute fire man, he took it in all cats for me.

Vote - Nino.

[L_Nino]

Consistency/Structure:NONE
Creativity: NONE
Personal:POTENT



Dont know the definition of consistency/structure??..
Creativity? Mines had more original lines than his...
& ok, show me where he had more personals in his verse....


Explain to me...

[LADEN]

NO BEEF :cool:

[L_Nino]

NO BEEF :cool:

Never said there was...


I said...


Explain it to me...

[LADEN]

YO JUST CHILL,IF U DON'T LIKE MY VOTE,THEN I'LL TAKE IT BACK :D (on the other hand i won't)SORRY

[L_Nino]

YO JUST CHILL,IF U DON'T LIKE MY VOTE,THEN I'LL TAKE IT BACK :D (on the other hand i won't)SORRY


I jus' wanna know how come a 18 yr. old cant read....



I mean....How come you cant explain ya vote...

[LADEN]

It's Not My Fault U Can't Accept A Loss,the Fuck U Questionin Me For?stop Disturbin Da Peace Or The Peace Will Disturb U.votez....

[L_Nino]

It's Not My Fault U Can't Accept A Loss,the Fuck U Questionin Me For?


I can accept a loss when you learn to read...



Its hard losin' a battle, Laden tell me your secret how you deal wit' losin' consecutive battles all the time....

[Potent]

SAFE syze and enfinitee, 2-1 to L. uppin for more votes ppl.....SAFE

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[LADEN]

I JUST DECIDE THAT EVERYDAY'S A BAD DAY CUZ EVERYBODY ON THIS SITE HATE ME. :confused: I'M KINDA USED TO LOSIN :o

[L_Nino]

I know you are...

The girls on the site have better battle records than u....


But anyway...


P can count the vote I jus' want the reasonin' behind it....


Explain...

[LADEN]

Okay,let's Say I Was In A Hurry To Get A Link En I Made A Wrong Decision,i'm Sorry

[L_Nino]

Nah thats stupid (although thats what almost everyone on this site does)...


Break it down b....Whats so hard about explainin' ya vote??

[L_Nino]

Whoa whoa whoa....Hold up....



Ur a biter??



Ur vote shouldnt even count then...WTF you still doin' here?!

[Potent]

cancel the vote if u want.......

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(allow biters)

[LADEN]

Don't Push Me To My Limitz.me A Biter,if I Was Then I Would I Been Losin Every Battle?think About It..,

[Potent]

lol i aint got facts to prove shit.....so u and L sort it....

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[L_Nino]

Don't Push Me To My Limitz...


:rolleyes:


Couldn't jus' explain it, could ya?...

Anyway..

P can keep the vote....Till theres proof you're a biter...


2-1 L

[L_Nino]

Still uppin' for broken down votes....

[L_Nino]

Still uppin' for broken down votes....

Uppin' :D

[Potent]

2 - 1 L. and 156 views....hmmm uppin ppl! SAFE :D

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[Potent]

come on ppl - this is prolly the most enjoyable battle in the battle zone at the moment! can we try get this rapped up? SAFE PPL

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[L_Nino]

come on ppl - this is prolly the most enjoyable battle in the battle zone at the moment!

My battle wit' CapZ was good too.....Well my verse anyway :D

[CapZ]

lol^^^ nice 1 man... oh n potent u wanna battle??[I KNOW THIS AINT DA CALLOUT SECTION] But fuck it



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Consistency/Structure: tie
Creativity: tie
Enjoyable: L nino
Flow: POTENT
Metaphors: tie
Multies: L nino
Personal: tie
Punches: tie
Vocabulary: none really but Potent wins it
Wordplay: L nino
Overall: close battle but L nino got this.....

[L_Nino]

@Po': Count it or ya want 'em to explain?....

[Potent]

count it, we aint gona get n e mo bar-by-bar votes.....SAFE 4 the Vote!! Uppin' ppl!

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[tYaYo23]

Even Though L Is TRyin To Beef Wit My Crew ill drop this one


Consistency/Structure: L
Creativity: L
Enjoyable: L
Flow:L
Metaphors: Potent
Multies: L
Personal: L
Punches: L
Vocabulary: Tie
Wordplay: Close But L
Overall: Sorry Dawg But L Raped You Bro


Yo Whats Your beef Wit Whizz Dude Ne Way?
hit me back with that shit
and if u dissin the crew when u dissin her that mean u dissin me dawg

[Bakkie]

Consistency/Structure:Both
Creativity:Both
Enjoyable:hmmm...Both
Flow: L-Nino
Metaphors: Both
Multies: L-Nino
Personal: hmm..this is tight but L-Nino
Punches:L-Nino
Vocabulary:Potent
Wordplay: Both
Overall:L-Nino you got this one son...potent your verse woz gud just L-nino's come just harder.

L-Nino i liked your opening bar gud creativity.
I enjoyed yours more than potents coz you hit sum killer punches man.

Potent your's woz gud verse i liked the wendy's bit made me laugh.
well done your getting closer to be on top level.

Great battle guys

[Inevitable]

5-1 L Nino wins.

Next time please dont freepost so much.

*CLOSED