Antwan vs BlackShark (0-4 KO)

[BlackShark]

no limit
n e one can vote unless its obvious its a hate/d/r vote
blind spit
loser put "I'm _________'s bitch" in there sig and must stay there for a month IN BIG LETTERS
no biting
votes must be fully explained..all categories!!!! otherwise no votes!....also KKZ cant vote cuz there bitches :D
agreed?

[Whyte ()ut]

Ite i jus did mine now...The rules are agreed U must have the quote in exactly a munth follwing the decided winner of battle

Kinda rapped to eminems Backstabber beat (INFINTE)

Sound the alarm and call it a closed bay/Take da kids outta the water/Cus lil children are his prey/He sits at home day and night planning for the attack/ Clenching his fists tight/ I got him by his air sac/Trouble time breathing I punch him in the nose/blood splurting out/Like a rainbows red glow/Huffing and puffing until you pass out/ Cut u up to sushi/ People mistakin u for a trout/ Pussy BlackShark thinks hes talenetd and real tuff/sayin ud destroy Antwan in a battle/ nah dis bitch is a bluff/Everytime i speak i give dis bitch da chills/ Rusty old meat cleaver/Slash u from ur fins to ur gills/When people run from u they mistake u from jaws/They see ur pussy lil teeth/they stop runnin in awe/ They Thank God It wasant a shark that woulda left them dead/This shark is pussy/ Thank You lord it wasant a hammer head/ Cut this fishy up and gut him internally/make him suffer pain/ like hell for the rest of eternity/Take out his spleen and sell it on the market/You got 20 bucks on ebay/wonder how much theyd go for the whole carcass/Yah the kitchen is open and I just walked in/Bib around my neck/ Like I just entered a red lobster inn

explanantions:
His name is Blackshark...so most of the thing ahs to do with sharks
The kitchen quote...he called me out saying the kitchen is open
everything else is pretty easy to know
Ask any quetsions if you need help knowing something

http://forum.eminem.net/showthread.php?t=8283
http://forum.eminem.net/showthread....96591#post96591

[BlackShark]

Antwan you must be verbally confused
cause i’ve never seen somebody so determined to lose
do you have brains…do you even have a clue
bet your balls have a bigger membrane than you
put 51 cards of you in a deck, and you still wont end up on top
cause you just the kid in the streets living by eatin cock
if you win its a fluke, thats if worst comes to worst
but i ain’t trippin, you got murdered first bar of this verse
let me explain to u how hard i am plain and simple,
ill jab u in the eye so many times, you'll look like a white bitches pink nipple,
i'll stomp u with cleats and put more holes in ya mask then jason’s
its like he from harlem look how bad he's shakin*
antwan randomly sucks, so when he wins its like the lottery
this fags gotta be up peoples asses so much he commitin sodomy*
leave me to creep up on ya, then send a back hand to this nerd
if speech represents talent, i see antwan is a man of few words
like a ballot at playboy’s mansion ya only votes are dick riders
bitch u couldn’t win if ya verse was formed by ghostwriters
u probably think ur black, but when u look in the mirror its really ur asshole
but in reality, the closest u’ll get 2 black is looking at ur shadow
bitch, my rhymes r killin u, so don’t start bitchin bout stones and sticks*
this aint halloween, bitch, so ur flows aint treats, they nuttin but tricks
i can't believe im battlin another queer rapper
this shits a game, if all he had to do was kiss a girl he’d walk off of fear factor
im fuckin with his brain “no doubt” the way i got him goin “bananas”*
thinks he gangster when he runnin around wearin his grandmas bandanas*


1*harlem shake…should get if not ur dumb
2*up peoples ass-hes annoying……sodomy-is ass fuckin
3*sticks and stone wont break my bone and words will never hurt me….thats what it came from
4*song by no doubt called aint no holla back gurl
5*some old ladies have hankerchiefs…now known as bandanas…it’s a metaphor

VOTE UP!!!!



http://forum.eminem.net/showthread.php?t=10274
http://forum.eminem.net/showthread.php?p=122033#post122033

[BlackShark]

actuallt kkz can vote asd long as they dont lie so i lose

[Lyricologist_RiCo]

Sound the alarm and call it a closed bay/Take da kids outta the water/Cus lil children are his prey/He sits at home day and night planning for the attack/ Clenching his fists tight/ I got him by his air sac/Trouble time breathing I punch him in the nose/blood splurting out/Like a rainbows red glow/Huffing and puffing until you pass out/ Cut u up to sushi/ People mistakin u for a trout/ Pussy BlackShark thinks hes talenetd and real tuff/sayin ud destroy Antwan in a battle/ nah dis bitch is a bluff/Everytime i speak i give dis bitch da chills/ Rusty old meat cleaver/Slash u from ur fins to ur gills/When people run from u they mistake u from jaws/They see ur pussy lil teeth/they stop runnin in awe/ They Thank God It wasant a shark that woulda left them dead/This shark is pussy/ Thank You lord it wasant a hammer head/ Cut this fishy up and gut him internally/make him suffer pain/ like hell for the rest of eternity/Take out his spleen and sell it on the market/You got 20 bucks on ebay/wonder how much theyd go for the whole carcass/Yah the kitchen is open and I just walked in/Bib around my neck/ Like I just entered a red lobster inn

ANTWAN YA VERSE WAS OK BUT IT WAS LIKE U WASNT EVEN TRYIN.....THURR WASNT MANY PUNCHLINES.....NOT GOOD ONES ANYWAY.....WASNT ENJOYABLE TO ME.....I THINK U COULD'VE DID BETTER.....PART REALLY DIDNT MAKE SENSE.....SOME PARTS WERE JUS CORNY AND LAME

Antwan you must be verbally confused
cause i’ve never seen somebody so determined to lose
do you have brains…do you even have a clue
bet your balls have a bigger membrane than you
put 51 cards of you in a deck, and you still wont end up on top
cause you just the kid in the streets living by eatin cock
if you win its a fluke, thats if worst comes to worst
but i ain’t trippin, you got murdered first bar of this verse
let me explain to u how hard i am plain and simple,
ill jab u in the eye so many times, you'll look like a white bitches pink nipple,
i'll stomp u with cleats and put more holes in ya mask then jason’s
its like he from harlem look how bad he's shakin*
antwan randomly sucks, so when he wins its like the lottery
this fags gotta be up peoples asses so much he commitin sodomy*
leave me to creep up on ya, then send a back hand to this nerd
if speech represents talent, i see antwan is a man of few words
like a ballot at playboy’s mansion ya only votes are dick riders
bitch u couldn’t win if ya verse was formed by ghostwriters
u probably think ur black, but when u look in the mirror its really ur asshole
but in reality, the closest u’ll get 2 black is looking at ur shadow
bitch, my rhymes r killin u, so don’t start bitchin bout stones and sticks*
this aint halloween, bitch, so ur flows aint treats, they nuttin but tricks
i can't believe im battlin another queer rapper
this shits a game, if all he had to do was kiss a girl he’d walk off of fear factor
im fuckin with his brain “no doubt” the way i got him goin “bananas”*
thinks he gangster when he runnin around wearin his grandmas bandanas*


BLACK YA VERSE WAS GOOD......IT WAS ENJOYABLE.......LIKED DA METAS......PUNCHLINES WERE GOOD.....I THINK U DOMINATED ALL CATEGORIES....GOOD JOB

Consistency/Structure: black
Creativity:black
Enjoyable: black
Flow:black
Metaphors: black
Multies: neither
Personal:neither
Punches:black
Vocabulary: neither
Wordplay:
Overall: black

[L_Nino]

ANTWAN:

Sound the alarm and call it a closed bay/
Take da kids outta the water/Cus lil children are his prey/

^^^ Weak opener...

He sits at home day and night planning for the attack/
Clenching his fists tight/ I got him by his air sac/

^^^ Ehhh...

Trouble time breathing I punch him in the nose/blood splurting out/
Like a rainbows red glow/Huffing and puffing until you pass out/
Cut u up to sushi/ People mistakin u for a trout/

^^^ Choppy...

Pussy BlackShark thinks hes talenetd and real tuff/
sayin ud destroy Antwan in a battle/ nah dis bitch is a bluff/

^^^ 2nd grade rhymes...

Everytime i speak i give dis bitch da chills/
Rusty old meat cleaver/Slash u from ur fins to ur gills/

^^^ Decent...

When people run from u they mistake u from jaws/
They see ur pussy lil teeth/they stop runnin in awe/

^^^ Ok...

They Thank God It wasant a shark that woulda left them dead/
This shark is pussy/ Thank You lord it wasant a hammer head/

^^^ Alright concept, Coulda been alot better....

Cut this fishy up and gut him internally/
Make him suffer pain/ like hell for the rest of eternity/

^^^ Basic rhymin'....

Take out his spleen and sell it on the market/
You got 20 bucks on ebay/wonder how much theyd go for the whole carcass/

^^^ Strizzle..

Yah the kitchen is open and I just walked in/
Bib around my neck/ Like I just entered a red lobster inn

^^^ Ehhhh...Ok reference to Blackshark's callout thread but overall a weak ender...



BLACKSHARK:

Antwan you must be verbally confused
cause i’ve never seen somebody so determined to lose

^^^ Ehhhh...Better than Ant's openin' bar...

do you have brains…do you even have a clue
bet your balls have a bigger membrane than you

^^^ So so..

put 51 cards of you in a deck, and you still wont end up on top
cause you just the kid in the streets living by eatin cock

^^^ Liked the 1st line, 2nd line was weak....

if you win its a fluke, thats if worst comes to worst
but i ain’t trippin, you got murdered first bar of this verse

^^^ Simple....

let me explain to u how hard i am plain and simple,
ill jab u in the eye so many times, you'll look like a white bitches pink nipple,

^^^ Aight...

i'll stomp u with cleats and put more holes in ya mask then jason’s
its like he from harlem look how bad he's shakin*

^^^ Hahaha...This where it started gettin' good

antwan randomly sucks, so when he wins its like the lottery
this fags gotta be up peoples asses so much he commitin sodomy*

^^^ Nice....

leave me to creep up on ya, then send a back hand to this nerd
if speech represents talent, i see antwan is a man of few words

^^^ WHAT!!!

like a ballot at playboy’s mansion ya only votes are dick riders
bitch u couldn’t win if ya verse was formed by ghostwriters

^^^ Diggin' the first line, Kinda fell off a lil' here......

u probably think ur black, but when u look in the mirror its really ur asshole
but in reality, the closest u’ll get 2 black is looking at ur shadow

^^^ & got back on wit' this set....

bitch, my rhymes r killin u, so don’t start bitchin bout stones and sticks*
this aint halloween, bitch, so ur flows aint treats, they nuttin but tricks

^^^ Ok...

i can't believe im battlin another queer rapper
this shits a game, if all he had to do was kiss a girl he’d walk off of fear factor

^^^ So so...

im fuckin with his brain “no doubt” the way i got him goin “bananas”*
thinks he gangster when he runnin around wearin his grandmas bandanas*

^^^ Kinda weak ender but a better one than Ants....



Consistency/Structure: BLK
Creativity: BLK
Enjoyable: BLK
Flow: BLK...Twan's was choppy..
Metaphors: BLK
Multies: TIE
Personal: ANT
Punches: BLK
Vocabulary: TIE
Wordplay: TIE
Overall: BlackShark



VOTE: BLACKSHARK

[MassalamiII]

Consistency/Structure: B
Creativity: B
Enjoyable: B
Flow: B
Metaphors: B
Multies: TIE
Personal: A
Punches: B
Vocabulary: TIE
Wordplay: TIE
Overall: B

[Whyte ()ut]

^
votes must be fully explained..all categories!!!! otherwise no votes
That means Line to Line Massalami

[BlackShark]

that is all cats...i won 3-0 nice battle

[Whyte ()ut]

no u didnit it wasant a good vote. I dunt rele care bout the quote but he didnt vote the right way like uasked LINE 2 LINE

[BlackShark]

i didnt ask line to line
this is what i said

votes must be fully explained..all categories!!!!

[Whyte ()ut]

wateva i rele can care less good battle

[CapZ]

lol Dis da only battle left ta vote on really...

PUNCHES- BLACK
PERSONALS-A
MULTIES- TIE
MET'S- A
CREATIVE- BLACK
WORDPLAY-TIE
VOCAB-A
ENJOYED-BLACK
FLOW-BLACK
STRUCTURE- BLACK

OVERALL- BLACK SHARK CAME HARDER

`1`

[Inevitable]

Blackshark wins 4-0 KO.

*CLOSED