Bakkie Vs. vR.Nemesis (5-4)

[Bakkie]

The Rulez Are:

5 bar spit
No Beef/dikriding/h8/crew votez
3.0 K.O
First to five wins

You spit first.

[vR.Nemesis]

http://forum.eminem.net/showthread.php?p=120663#post120663
http://forum.eminem.net/showthread.php?t=8709&page=2&pp=10

yo, this is.... vR.Nemesis versus Bakkie, his record...is retarded, this is my first battle at eminem.net, aight..

lets get this crackin, lets make it happen, me versus Bakkie, the shit is lackin/
some talent from one side of the corner, it must be bakkie, cuz im never slackin//
never had a gun, but heat im packin, flows burn like an ember, when im attackin/
at emcees hearts, like you swallowed anthrax, im a home wrecker , i send you packin//
kinda like a B-ball game, 3 seconds, im trailin by one, then i get a swish in the hoop/
after this battle you'll need to recoup, cuz i made better raps in my alpha bet soup//
my tongue is a whip that lashes, at emcees who step to me like a titan and clashes/
Bakkie ur messin wit the best, i put u to rest, wit rhymes that turn u into black ashes//
Hey bakkie, quick question, are you a homo? why do u have 2pac naked in your logo?
i usually keep the hits above the belt so u do know, but this aint boxing,fuck a low blow

[Bakkie]

The only thing thats cracking,is your bitch'z skin that i'll be smacking,
There aint nuthing i'll be lacking,Coz i got my Tech 9 that will be attacking,

Stop thinking your the shit,stepping in to my world,get off my rubble,
You need style,a little bit of rebal,and be the age of 16 wid sum stubble,

Why lie about your age?is it coz your trying your hardest to get paid?
Or is it coz your an ugle fuking Canadian fagg that cant get layed?

Ooo shit..so you still eat alphabet soup for food do ya mate?
Dont worry i can cut my lethal lyrics nice n neat on ya plate,

You can call me a criminal or a crook robbing a bank waiting to cruise
I smash and dash,get rid of the rash Nemesis n teach the bitch how to lose.


its crap but never mind. gud luck dude votez plz people

[Bakkie]

Here's my links:
http://forum.eminem.net/showthread.php?t=10192
http://forum.eminem.net/showthread.php?t=10157

[Emmanyei]

Consistency/Structure:b
Creativity:nonw
Enjoyable:none
Flow:b
Metaphors:none
Multies:none
Personal: equal
Punches:weak both
Vocabulary:none
Wordplay:none
Overall:weak battle but i vote 4 bakkie

[Bakkie]

thnks for vote dude.kk then peeps 1.0 me sum more votez cheerz

[OMC Bonez]

Nemesis

lets get this crackin, lets make it happen, me versus Bakkie, the shit is lackin/
some talent from one side of the corner, it must be bakkie, cuz im never slackin//

Nothing special, not really a good opener.

never had a gun, but heat im packin, flows burn like an ember, when im attackin/
at emcees hearts, like you swallowed anthrax, im a home wrecker , i send you packin//

Ehh...?

kinda like a B-ball game, 3 seconds, im trailin by one, then i get a swish in the hoop/
after this battle you'll need to recoup, cuz i made better raps in my alpha bet soup//

It was and alright punch, it didnt suck, but it was alright...

my tongue is a whip that lashes, at emcees who step to me like a titan and clashes/
Bakkie ur messin wit the best, i put u to rest, wit rhymes that turn u into black ashes//

This one i liked the best! Good Job.

Hey bakkie, quick question, are you a homo? why do u have 2pac naked in your logo?
i usually keep the hits above the belt so u do know, but this aint boxing,fuck a low blow

"Hey bakkie, quick question, are you a homo? why do u have 2pac naked in your logo?" I was digging that line right there, loved it, but the 2nd one to it didn't amaze me.

-Bakkie
The only thing thats cracking,is your bitch'z skin that i'll be smacking,
There aint nuthing i'll be lacking,Coz i got my Tech 9 that will be attacking,

1st Line:How can your skin crack..? It'll get bruised if ya smack it but how does your skin crack?
2nd Line:You kind of flipt the script on him a lil bit there, but you could of done better.

Stop thinking your the shit,stepping in to my world,get off my rubble,
You need style,a little bit of rebal,and be the age of 16 wid sum stubble,

Nope, not feelin it.

Why lie about your age?is it coz your trying your hardest to get paid?
Or is it coz your an ugle fuking Canadian fagg that cant get layed?

The first line, it was and alright line to start off the next bar, but the 2nd line to that bar wasn't feelin that either. If you said something else that goes with the first line besides uglie Canadian fagg, it would of been a great punch line.

Ooo shit..so you still eat alphabet soup for food do ya mate?
Dont worry i can cut my lethal lyrics nice n neat on ya plate,

I like this line, you countered his rhymed and added something to it. I Like it.

You can call me a criminal or a crook robbing a bank waiting to cruise
I smash and dash,get rid of the rash Nemesis n teach the bitch how to lose.

Bad ending...


Over All Vote:Nemesis

He fixed up his verse more, he gave some good metaphors and one or 2 good punch lines, Bakkie in the other hand, you could of came at back at him real hard, but ya did a nice job, you sound like u slacked in the beginning and picked your self back up. Ya both did a pretty nice job, but i've seen better.

[Ghost Emperor]

Consistency/Structure:b
Creativity:b
Enjoyable:vr
Flow:vr
Metaphors:none
Multies:none
Personal: equal
Punches:equal
Vocabulary:b
Wordplay:none
Overall:bakkie

[slimshadyLP]

Consistency/Structure: B
Creativity: tie
Enjoyable: B
Flow: vr
Metaphors: -
Multies: -
Personal: vr
Punches: tie
Vocabulary: b
Wordplay: -
Overall: Bakkie wins.

[Bakkie]

k thanks for the brake down OMC Bones.Yo and thanks for the votez slimshadyLP and Ghost Emperor i no its weak battle n shit i dint cum as hard as i shud of on this battle but hay nevermind cheerz for vote 3-1 to me people keep voteing cheerz

[Falix]

Consistency/Structure: v
Creativity: tie
Enjoyable: v
Flow: v
Metaphors: v
Multies: ...
Personal: v
Punches: v
Vocabulary: b
Wordplay: v
Overall: v

[Bakkie]

kk 3.2 now to me sum more votez plz cheerz

[Bakkie]

votez plz

[hawkeye]

Consistency/Structure:b
Creativity: vr
Enjoyablevr:
Flow:vr
Metaphors:b
Multies:b
Personal: vr
Punches:vr
Vocabulary:b
Wordplay:vr
Overall: vr

[Bakkie]

Thnks 4 vote Hawkeye kk then now its 3-3 can we have sum more vote plz cheerz

[Bakkie]

thnks its 3-3 cumon peepz votez cheerz

[madchild]

vR.Nemesis:

lets get this crackin, lets make it happen, me versus Bakkie, the shit is lackin/
some talent from one side of the corner, it must be bakkie, cuz im never slackin//

Alright intro.

never had a gun, but heat im packin, flows burn like an ember, when im attackin/
at emcees hearts, like you swallowed anthrax, im a home wrecker , i send you packin//

Pretty decent and creative thoughts.

kinda like a B-ball game, 3 seconds, im trailin by one, then i get a swish in the hoop/
after this battle you'll need to recoup, cuz i made better raps in my alpha bet soup//

The first part of this bar, didn't really make much sense to anything around it.

my tongue is a whip that lashes, at emcees who step to me like a titan and clashes/
Bakkie ur messin wit the best, i put u to rest, wit rhymes that turn u into black ashes//

Pretty creative.

Hey bakkie, quick question, are you a homo? why do u have 2pac naked in your logo?
i usually keep the hits above the belt so u do know, but this aint boxing,fuck a low blow.

This was an alright closer and personal, but overall, you were lacking hard-hitting punchlines and personals. You had some good creativity though.

6.5/10

Bakkie:

The only thing thats cracking,is your bitch'z skin that i'll be smacking,
There aint nuthing i'll be lacking,Coz i got my Tech 9 that will be attacking,

Not really all that great of an intro. If you're going to feed off his verse, you really need to flip the script on him.

Stop thinking your the shit,stepping in to my world,get off my rubble,
You need style,a little bit of rebal,and be the age of 16 wid sum stubble,

The words you used to rhyme were pretty blend. "rubble"? It's like you were looking for a word to rhyme with "stubble" and just through it in.

Why lie about your age?is it coz your trying your hardest to get paid?
Or is it coz your an ugle fuking Canadian fagg that cant get layed?

Pretty weak diss.

Ooo shit..so you still eat alphabet soup for food do ya mate?
Dont worry i can cut my lethal lyrics nice n neat on ya plate,

Not very creative at all.

You can call me a criminal or a crook robbing a bank waiting to cruise
I smash and dash,get rid of the rash Nemesis n teach the bitch how to lose.

Average closer. You need better punchlines. More creativity in your bars and disses, rather than random threats. Try using metaphors and multies.

3/10

VOTE - vR.Nemesis

[Bakkie]

cumon then peepz 4-3 to Vr. sum more votez plz cheerz

[Bakkie]

cum on then people 4-3 to him some votez plz cheerz

[CapZ]

Consistency/Structure:b
Creativity:nonw
Enjoyable:none
Flow:b
Metaphors:none
Multies:none
Personal: equal
Punches:weak both
Vocabulary:none
Wordplay:none
Overall:weak battle but i vote 4 bakkie


TRUE DAT'S MA VOTE^^ BUT R U SUPOSE TO FEED?? CUZ DAT WHAT U DID B... UNLESS DAT AINT ON DA RULES IT'S KOOL

`1`

[Bakkie]

dunno hommie thans for the vote tho cuz cumon then peeps 4-4 votez plz

[chappy]

Consistency/Structure:b
Creativity: vr
Enjoyable: b
Flow:b
Metaphors:b
Multies:b
Personal: vr
Punches:vr
Vocabulary:b
Wordplay:vr
Overall: b

well done m8......keep uppin Nemesis, PEACE

[Bakkie]

yo thnks for the vote chappy kk gud battle Vr. no beef m8.kk MODS cud ya lock this cheerz