Falix vs. mako (0-4 KO)

[mako]

Here's the rules:

1 round
5 Bars=10 Lines to 7 bars=14 Lines
3 votes to 0 is a k.o...First to 5 votes...
3 k.o.,5 t.k.o.
no dickridin'

[Falix]

how u pronounce ur name (mah-ko) or (may-ko)... i keep callin u (mah-ko) so ill continue wit that

*im so embarassed* * our names appear in the* ~same thread
*ur a Jew im a Nazi*, *end of discussin*, ~enough said

*there must be a glitch in the system if im* ~battling Mako
*i stomp him like ground beef, then i eat* ~em like a Taco

*i hope ur rap is easier to understand* ~then ur name dood
*metaphorically* *your jus a bolt* ~waitin to get screwed

*your out ma league* * i play you like the strings on* ~a guitar
*my crew is not D12* * but trust when i say that i*~am bizarre

*I never go far without my* *teflon and my* ~shottie fully loaded
*You never go far without ur* *G String and ur* ~dildo sugar caoated

*My style is like no other* *in a lab under the ground* ~genetically made
*i eat a grenade* *invade the surface like a crusade* ~try to evade

*i keep my brain running like an invulnerable* ~terry fox
*u keep ur mouth open like a gas station* ~servicing cocks

[mako]

mako is "stunning-still" and falix couldnt "battle" if they was "funding-skills"/
giving off "heat" like "fevers" im "something-ill", spittin "fire" that keepz ya "school'd" like u "running drills"//
engage shots that leave verses like "puberty" with your "face-popped"/
quick to "squeeze" on falix like "brake locked"//
it's my "Heaters-Combined" bullets "Fill Your Mouth" wider then ya "cheeks-can-divide"/
shots like "itches you can't reach" falix it'll "creep up your spine"//
you comen tight wut da fuck dat mean to me, you and rap will neva happen like smoken weed "legally"/
you beaten me, is like Vanilla Ice making it on "B.E.T", death with ya eyes open with a "guillotine"//
he can't stomach my punches like they rip his "abs apart"/
so Ill split his cardiac in two' and show him how to "halve some heart"//
leave wit a tarnished brain, and leave you with missing "conceptions"/
and there's no way you'll land punches your modemless just "missing connections"//
falix now understand, i'll rip you in "portions"/
i dont play games he processed his lyrics on circles and still couldn't "wheel in a fortune"//

http://forum.eminem.net/showthread.php?p=120261#post120261

[mako]

http://forum.eminem.net/showthread.php?p=120261#post120261

My second Link:

http://forum.eminem.net/showthread.php?p=120419#post120419

[Falix]

votes please

[L_Nino]

FALIX:

*im so embarassed* * our names appear in the* ~same thread
*ur a Jew im a Nazi*, *end of discussin*, ~enough said

^^^ Ehhhh...Not a good opener..

*there must be a glitch in the system if im* ~battling Mako
*i stomp him like ground beef, then i eat* ~em like a Taco

^^^ Weak...

*i hope ur rap is easier to understand* ~then ur name dood
*metaphorically* *your jus a bolt* ~waitin to get screwed

^^^ Ok...

*your out ma league* * i play you like the strings on* ~a guitar
*my crew is not D12* * but trust when i say that i*~am bizarre

^^^ Nahhh...

*I never go far without my* *teflon and my* ~shottie fully loaded
*You never go far without ur* *G String and ur* ~dildo sugar caoated

^^^ Pretty weak...

*My style is like no other* *in a lab under the ground* ~genetically made
*i eat a grenade* *invade the surface like a crusade* ~try to evade

^^^ Liked the flow...

*i keep my brain running like an invulnerable* ~terry fox
*u keep ur mouth open like a gas station* ~servicing cocks

^^^ Alright...



MAKO:

mako is "stunning-still" and falix couldnt "battle" if they was "funding-skills"/
giving off "heat" like "fevers" im "something-ill", spittin "fire" that keepz ya "school'd" like u "running drills"//

^^^ Nice flow, good lyrics...

engage shots that leave verses like "puberty" with your "face-popped"/
quick to "squeeze" on falix like "brake locked"//

^^^ Decent...

it's my "Heaters-Combined" bullets "Fill Your Mouth" wider then ya "cheeks-can-divide"/
shots like "itches you can't reach" falix it'll "creep up your spine"//

^^^ Ok...

you comen tight wut da fuck dat mean to me, you and rap will neva happen like smoken weed "legally"/
you beaten me, is like Vanilla Ice making it on "B.E.T", death with ya eyes open with a "guillotine"//

^^^ Koo...

he can't stomach my punches like they rip his "abs apart"/
so Ill split his cardiac in two' and show him how to "halve some heart"//

^^^ Played concept but its aight...

leave wit a tarnished brain, and leave you with missing "conceptions"/
and there's no way you'll land punches your modemless just "missing connections"//

^^^ Nice...

falix now understand, i'll rip you in "portions"/
i dont play games he processed his lyrics on circles and still couldn't "wheel in a fortune"//

^^^ Nice...


Consistency/Structure: M
Creativity: M
Enjoyable: M
Flow: M
Metaphors: M
Multies: M
Personal: TIE
Punches: M
Vocabulary: M
Wordplay: M
Overall: Mako



VOTE: MAKO

[JD da MC]

FALIX:

*im so embarassed* * our names appear in the* ~same thread
*ur a Jew im a Nazi*, *end of discussin*, ~enough said
not feelin the opener, first line was a shit as diss

*there must be a glitch in the system if im* ~battling Mako
*i stomp him like ground beef, then i eat* ~em like a Taco
Taco and beef bit was alright, but still not a very good bar

*i hope ur rap is easier to understand* ~then ur name dood
*metaphorically* *your jus a bolt* ~waitin to get screwed
nope

*your out ma league* * i play you like the strings on* ~a guitar
*my crew is not D12* * but trust when i say that i*~am bizarre
liked the second line

*I never go far without my* *teflon and my* ~shottie fully loaded
*You never go far without ur* *G String and ur* ~dildo sugar coated
not feelin it

*My style is like no other* *in a lab under the ground* ~genetically made
*i eat a grenade* *invade the surface like a crusade* ~try to evade
favourite bar from your verse, flowed nicely

*i keep my brain running like an invulnerable* ~terry fox
*u keep ur mouth open like a gas station* ~servicing cocks
not a very good finished

MAKO:

mako is "stunning-still" and falix couldnt "battle" if they was "funding-skills"/
giving off "heat" like "fevers" im "something-ill", spittin "fire" that keepz ya "school'd" like u "running drills"//
nicely opened, started with nice multis

engage shots that leave verses like "puberty" with your "face-popped"/
quick to "squeeze" on falix like "brake locked"//

not bad

it's my "Heaters-Combined" bullets "Fill Your Mouth" wider then ya "cheeks-can-divide"/
shots like "itches you can't reach" falix it'll "creep up your spine"//
liked the first line, not a bad bar

you comen tight wut da fuck dat mean to me, you and rap will neva happen like smoken weed "legally"/
you beaten me, is like Vanilla Ice making it on "B.E.T", death with ya eyes open with a "guillotine"//
weed bit was nice

he can't stomach my punches like they rip his "abs apart"/
so Ill split his cardiac in two' and show him how to "halve some heart"//
not bad

leave wit a tarnished brain, and leave you with missing "conceptions"/
and there's no way you'll land punches your modemless just "missing connections"//
alright

falix now understand, i'll rip you in "portions"/
i dont play games he processed his lyrics on circles and still couldn't "wheel in a fortune"//
very nicely finished


Consistency/Structure: M
Creativity: M
Enjoyable: M
Flow: M
Metaphors: M
Multies: M
Personal: M
Punches: M
Vocabulary: M
Wordplay: M
Overall: Mako, easily ripped this

[mattSMD]

*im so embarassed* * our names appear in the* ~same thread
*ur a Jew im a Nazi*, *end of discussin*, ~enough said
thread/said, basic rhyme. weak opener, would have fitted better at the end of your spit
*there must be a glitch in the system if im* ~battling Mako
*i stomp him like ground beef, then i eat* ~em like a Taco
good. flowed well and the rhyme, although basic, fitted well
*i hope ur rap is easier to understand* ~then ur name dood
*metaphorically* *your jus a bolt* ~waitin to get screwed
again-nice idea but I haven't seen a multie so far......
*your out ma league* * i play you like the strings on* ~a guitar
*my crew is not D12* * but trust when i say that i*~am bizarre
same as the others. it's like texting in monotone! flow is the same, as are the punches
*I never go far without my* *teflon and my* ~shottie fully loaded
*You never go far without ur* *G String and ur* ~dildo sugar caoated
a sugar coated dildo? interesting! don't really make sense but pretty funny
*My style is like no other* *in a lab under the ground* ~genetically made
*i eat a grenade* *invade the surface like a crusade* ~try to evade
one extreme to another- tried to force the multie there. would have been better if you left out the "try to evade"
*i keep my brain running like an invulnerable* ~terry fox
*u keep ur mouth open like a gas station* ~servicing cocks
weak closer



mako is "stunning-still" and falix couldnt "battle" if they was "funding-skills"/
giving off "heat" like "fevers" im "something-ill", spittin "fire" that keepz ya "school'd" like u "running drills"//
good opener. good use of multies, good flow
engage shots that leave verses like "puberty" with your "face-popped"/
quick to "squeeze" on falix like "brake locked"//
clever
it's my "Heaters-Combined" bullets "Fill Your Mouth" wider then ya "cheeks-can-divide"/
shots like "itches you can't reach" falix it'll "creep up your spine"//
good wordplay
you comen tight wut da fuck dat mean to me, you and rap will neva happen like smoken weed "legally"/
you beaten me, is like Vanilla Ice making it on "B.E.T", death with ya eyes open with a "guillotine"//
didnt really get why you were dissing Vannilla Ice. yeah he's wack but it aint much of a punch to Falix
he can't stomach my punches like they rip his "abs apart"/
so Ill split his cardiac in two' and show him how to "halve some heart"//
clever wordplay
leave wit a tarnished brain, and leave you with missing "conceptions"/
and there's no way you'll land punches your modemless just "missing connections"//
good
falix now understand, i'll rip you in "portions"/
i dont play games he processed his lyrics on circles and still couldn't "wheel in a fortune"//
brilliant spit

sorry falix, but mako totally ripped it, his spit would have beaten pretty much anyone, good effort though

[mako]

The score is 0-3 k.o.

[OMC Bonez]

*im so embarassed* * our names appear in the* ~same thread
*ur a Jew im a Nazi*, *end of discussin*, ~enough said

I agree with matt, this could of been better if it was at the end.

*there must be a glitch in the system if im* ~battling Mako
*i stomp him like ground beef, then i eat* ~em like a Taco

Nope, don't like.

*i hope ur rap is easier to understand* ~then ur name dood
*metaphorically* *your jus a bolt* ~waitin to get screwed

This one was alright, good punch.

*your out ma league* * i play you like the strings on* ~a guitar
*my crew is not D12* * but trust when i say that i*~am bizarre

Ummm....nah man wasn't feelin it, i knew where you getting at
but i feel like you could of done better on that line.

*I never go far without my* *teflon and my* ~shottie fully loaded
*You never go far without ur* *G String and ur* ~dildo sugar caoated

Not so strong.

*My style is like no other* *in a lab under the ground* ~genetically made
*i eat a grenade* *invade the surface like a crusade* ~try to evade

Good Vocab and Metaphors and good comparison.

*i keep my brain running like an invulnerable* ~terry fox
*u keep ur mouth open like a gas station* ~servicing cocks

good line, but not a good ender.



MAKO:

mako is "stunning-still" and falix couldnt "battle" if they was "funding-skills"/
giving off "heat" like "fevers" im "something-ill", spittin "fire" that keepz ya "school'd" like u "running drills"//

I like that line. Good Job there Mako.

engage shots that leave verses like "puberty" with your "face-popped"/
quick to "squeeze" on falix like "brake locked"//

It was alright...

it's my "Heaters-Combined" bullets "Fill Your Mouth" wider then ya "cheeks-can-divide"/
shots like "itches you can't reach" falix it'll "creep up your spine"//

Could of fixed the 2nd line bit on that bar and would of been better.

you comen tight wut da fuck dat mean to me, you and rap will neva happen like smoken weed "legally"/
you beaten me, is like Vanilla Ice making it on "B.E.T", death with ya eyes open with a "guillotine"//

"You beaten me, is like Vanilla Ice making it on "B.E.T"", hahahah, oh shit...hahah thats was nice...

he can't stomach my punches like they rip his "abs apart"/
so Ill split his cardiac in two' and show him how to "halve some heart"//

Not into that bar...wasn't feelin it..

leave wit a tarnished brain, and leave you with missing "conceptions"/
and there's no way you'll land punches your modemless just "missing connections"//

Good Bar.

falix now understand, i'll rip you in "portions"/
i dont play games he processed his lyrics on circles and still couldn't "wheel in a fortune"//

Hahaha, good ender.

Consistency/Structure: Mako
Creativity: Mako
Enjoyable: Mako
Flow: Mako
Metaphors: Mako
Multies: Mako
Personal: Mako
Punches: Mako
Vocabulary: Mako
Wordplay: Didn't have one..
Overall: Mako

[mako]

:BATTLES:

Wins:6:::::Losses:4:::

People i BeaT: Mako::: :confused: Chappy:::Slimshadylp:::-¦- $P!TTA -¦-:::Eluzion:::Bakkie:::Frog

People who BeaT me:Blackshark::: Disciple(check it out, i only did like 6 lines lol ppl said i woulda won if i used more lines):::Raider

[Potent]

i dont understand that last post, is mako really falix?
cheak d sigs....

1

[Falix]

lol no, i guess hes jus copyin me, maybe he likes layout

[Falix]

ohhhhhhhhhhhh he updated my sig for me...in other words, kinda rubbin it in my face that he won...no need to be an ass about it Mako