mako vs. osiris (5-2)

[mako]

1 round
5 Bars=10 Lines to 8 bars=18 Lines
3 votes to 0 is a k.o...First to 5 votes...
3 k.o.,5 t.k.o.
no dickridin' no bitin'

[mako]

orisis spits with A brick In his throat?, bars wouldnt be as hard as mine/
till Ya body engraved In The pave, Like handicap parking signs//
keep orisis coughing red, becuz his end is near/
sense his Fear, since it’s clear that he ain’t in my hemisphere//
a wordplay engineer about to murder a *botswana queer/
orisis weaker than Zima...i’m as stout as a guinness beer//
orisis career finished here i overshadow ducks in battle/
have him traveling shit creek without a paddle//
orisis ain't raw, he's getting cooked till he's all ash duke/
his bitches face is all ass, so I fucked it in a mall bathroom**(no homo)//
orisis couldnt wrestle attention from the special olympics w/god as his character witness/
Last time he rapped raw… ***Jim Duggan was wavin a Hacksaw (HO)//
whoever hyping orisis this actress/
get the illest ass whippin since Joe Jackson beat Michael Jackson of all his blackness//

* orisis is from botswana
** camron says no homo(if your a dipset fan you should know what it means)
*** jim duggan the wrestler

My two links:

http://forum.eminem.net/showthread.php?p=119457#post119457
http://forum.eminem.net/showthread.php?p=119460#post119460

[mako]

5 Bars=10 Lines to 8 bars=18 Lines

My bad....8 bars=16 Lines

[Falix]

have him traveling shit creek without a paddle//

thats basically taken from 8 Mile....

[osiris]

Mako at my hands u gon die slow
u might be a senior member
i'm bubbling under
u can't top this number
no need to debate
u is a lyrical degenerate
sucking dicks is your fate
as of late/u are my bate
with no beats
lyrically reach for your clits
poke u with astick
u just another glitch
One

http://forum.eminem.net/showthread.php?t=10192
http://forum.eminem.net/showthread.php?p=119460#post119460

[FrOg]

yo ma vote goes to

Consistency/Structure: osiris
Creativity: osiris
Enjoyable: osiris
Flow: osiris
Metaphors: osiris
Multies: osiris
Personal: osiris
Punches: osiris
Vocabulary: osiris
wordplay: osiris
Overall: osiris (sory mako but he was away better on this one)

[OG Kane]

mak0, your the first decent rapper i ever seen on this site, props to you :clap:

[Killa Jones]

Consistency/Structure: M
Creativity: M
Enjoyable: M
Flow: M
Metaphors: M
Multies: M
Personal: M
Punches: M
Vocabulary: M
wordplay: M
Overall: MAKO

NO CONTEST HANDS DOWN MAKO, AT FIRST I THOUGHT OSIRIS WAS JOKING

[Bakkie]

yo mako u got this 1 dude well done

Consistency/Structure: Mako
Creativity: Mako
Enjoyable: Mako
Flow: Mako
Metaphors: Mako
Multies: Mako
Personal: Mako
Punches: Mako
Vocabulary: Mako
wordplay: Mako
Overall: mako well done gud verse

[L_Nino]

Mako hands down....

[MassalamiII]

Consistency/Structure: Mako
Creativity: Mako
Enjoyable: Mako
Flow: Mako
Metaphors: Mako
Multies: Mako
Personal: Mako
Punches: Mako
Vocabulary: Mako
wordplay: Mako
Overall: mako
well done

[mattSMD]

Consistency/Structure: Mako
Creativity: Mako
Enjoyable: Mako
Flow: Mako
Metaphors: Mako
Multies: Mako
Personal: Mako
Punches: Mako
Vocabulary: Mako
wordplay: Mako
Overall: Mako

killed...........

[vR.Nemesis]

Consistency/Structure: osiris
Creativity: osiris
Enjoyable: osiris
Flow: osiris
Metaphors: osiris
Multies: osiris
Personal: osiris
Punches: osiris
Vocabulary: osiris
wordplay: osiris
Overall: osiris

[mako]

The score is 5-2 t.k.o.