Zac the Ripper vs. L_Nino (0-3 KO)

[L_Nino]

5 on 1 (SlimshadyLP, ZacTheRipper, Spitta, Static13, DZK Legacy)


6 Bars For KKz...5 bars for L
Each of you drops ONE bar....TWO for Zac (cuz he asked)...
First to 5 Votes...
3 KO...
5 TKO...
No Crew/ Hate/ Etc. Votes....
LOSERS GET BANNED (for 1 month only cuz thats what THEY wanted :rolleyes: )...





You go first since theres more of yall....









DEADLINE: Tomorrow Night@12....

[L_Nino]

http://forum.eminem.net/showthread.php?t=9807
http://forum.eminem.net/showthread.php?t=9856

[Zac the Ripper]

http://forum.eminem.net/showthread.php?t=9875
http://forum.eminem.net/showthread.php?t=9119&page=7

those my links.

[Zac the Ripper]

lol, what squad? the only two you have are bs and syze. anyways, whatever, I'm dropping now. (lion, my ass...)

Yo Nino, you say you a tight rapper and you think you all that/
muthafucka why not just admit it you know you're wack/
You always talking shit and you think you always right/
well, guess what, punk-bitch, I'ma fucking drop you tonight/
I know millions of peeps who can rhyme better than you/
fuck, my little cuz can rap better, she's only two./
You may not know, but my rhymes are strategic/
I'll fucking take you out at the kness, make you parapalegic/
Nino I thought you was cool, till you started talking shit/
Bitch, win or lose, regardless, I'll show you I won't be fucked with./

yo move, bitch.

[L_Nino]

This was 'posed to be a CREW battle...So you can talk all that trash in 'em bullshit threads but when it comes down to it yall nowhere to be found....pussies


1) Zac the Ripper?, I beg to differ...He more like HANDICAPPED PIZZBOYS cuz HE CAN'T DELIVER /
TOO EASY, You can find him 'round a FAGGOT's ZIPPER cuz ZAC A GIVER...RIPPIN' WHO? How this faggot figure, NO WINS, HIS SIG SHOW HE AINT A RIPPER /


2) Plus YOU NO ONE TO FOLLOW KID, Must be GAYS if THEY LIKE TO FOLLOW DICK...Or Are YOU CHICKS? Cuz ya LEADER got yall in a ABUSIVE RELATIONSHIP: YOU CANT GET OUT OF IT/
NO LP, SLIMSHADY's a COUNTERFEIT, SUNBURN 'bout AS HOT YOU GET...& SPIT's A BITCH, Dont let HIS NAME confuse you, The $P1TTA really SWALLOWS IT/....


3) L's a GAYBASHER, STATIC A FAGGOT, So THIS FIGHT ISNT FAIR...HE SCARED, HIS TRUE COLOR's YELLOW & I aint talkin' about the BLONDE DYE IN HIS HAIR / (dyes his hair....fag)
Zac warned STATIC that he would be dyin' in there....So HE DIDNT SHOW UP, Zac THREW IN HIS TOWEL FOR HIM, Couldn't be ABOVE ME if HE WAS FLYIN' IN THE AIR /


4) TOO BASIC, Ya LINES are CURTIS JACKSON that means PLENTY PLAYED....My shit FLIP BOARDS that's ENDIN' ANY GAME, YOU NEVER GET ANY FAME /
KKz was NO SHOWS like CLOSED MATINEES, Ashamed & soon to post under any name...Cuz he runnin' with a TEAM FULL OF PUSSIES & he's not even in the W.N.B.A /


5) I HEAT SCRIPTS, My verse FAULTY WIRING, It'll BURN YA LINES...NO AUDIO PLEASE!! If I WAS YOU, I'd BE A BITCH but I'd QUIT RAP if I HEARD YA RHYMES /
NEVER KRIMINALZ!! Yall BARELY 14 & got NO PRIORS, TRUE FACTS'll HURT YA LIES...Cuz the only KONDEMNED KRIMINALZ I know about are already SERVIN' TIME /



Jus' some weak shit for yo' weak ass....puss



P.S.

VOTERS: Theres nuthin' over ya head in there but holla@ me if you need any explainations...

[L_Nino]

BROKEN DOWN VOTES from ppl wit' OVER 100 POSTS ONLY, seein' as it involves all us gettin' banned.....

[Enfleurage]

Zac the Ripper

Yo Nino, you say you a tight rapper and you think you all that

Weak opener. This is in fact not even an opener, its like you started out of nowhere.

muthafucka why not just admit it you know you're wack

Clearly no thinking was put into these two lines.

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You always talking shit and you think you always right

Absolutely basic.

well, guess what, punk-bitch, I'ma fucking drop you tonight

Puting a swear-word once in a while does not make this personal. Atleast you rhymed the last word this time.

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I know millions of peeps who can rhyme better than you

Seems unfinished and is entirely generic

fuck, my little cuz can rap better, she's only two.

An attempt for some sort of humorous exaggeration, but you went overboard

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You may not know, but my rhymes are strategic

Not bad. Could impove by extending the idea.

I'll fucking take you out at the kness, make you parapalegic

Your best lines yet, but do not make any apparent sense. The two lines seem not to relate to each other.

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Nino I thought you was cool, till you started talking shit

Once again complementing your enemy, very unproductive.

Bitch, win or lose, regardless, I'll show you I won't be fucked with.

On the contrary, if you lose, you are getting fucked with.


L_Nino

1) Zac the Ripper?, I beg to differ...He more like HANDICAPPED PIZZBOYS cuz HE CAN'T DELIVER

Very good opener. A briliant simile produce by creative wordplay.

TOO EASY, You can find him 'round a FAGGOT's ZIPPER cuz ZAC A GIVER...RIPPIN' WHO? How this faggot figure, NO WINS, HIS SIG SHOW HE AINT A RIPPER

Very personal and backed up by many different disses.

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2) Plus YOU NO ONE TO FOLLOW KID, Must be GAYS if THEY LIKE TO FOLLOW DICK...Or Are YOU CHICKS? Cuz ya LEADER got yall in a ABUSIVE RELATIONSHIP: YOU CANT GET OUT OF IT

Briliant!

NO LP, SLIMSHADY's a COUNTERFEIT, SUNBURN 'bout AS HOT YOU GET...& SPIT's A BITCH, Dont let HIS NAME confuse you, The $P1TTA really SWALLOWS IT..

:clap: wow! This is some of the best lyrical content I've seen so far. Genious metaphor combined with destructive lyrics.

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3) L's a GAYBASHER, STATIC A FAGGOT, So THIS FIGHT ISNT FAIR...HE SCARED, HIS TRUE COLOR's YELLOW & I aint talkin' about the BLONDE DYE IN HIS HAIR (dyes his hair....fag)

Good confrontation and VERY personal.

Zac warned STATIC that he would be dyin' in there....So HE DIDNT SHOW UP, Zac THREW IN HIS TOWEL FOR HIM, Couldn't be ABOVE ME if HE WAS FLYIN' IN THE AIR

Decent! Filler but still helps develop the final message.

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4) TOO BASIC, Ya LINES are CURTIS JACKSON that means PLENTY PLAYED....My shit FLIP BOARDS that's ENDIN' ANY GAME, YOU NEVER GET ANY FAME

First-rate metaphor, very thought out rhymes. :clap:

KKz was NO SHOWS like CLOSED MATINEES, Ashamed & soon to post under any name...Cuz he runnin' with a TEAM FULL OF PUSSIES & he's not even in the W.N.B.A

LOL. Four star lyrics.

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5) I HEAT SCRIPTS, My verse FAULTY WIRING, It'll BURN YA LINES...NO AUDIO PLEASE!! If I WAS YOU, I'd BE A BITCH but I'd QUIT RAP if I HEARD YA RHYMES

Need I say more!

NEVER KRIMINALZ!! Yall BARELY 14 & got NO PRIORS, TRUE FACTS'll HURT YA LIES...Cuz the only KONDEMNED KRIMINALZ I know about are already SERVIN' TIME

Fine closing rhyme that totally rips apart KKZ and achieves L_Nino a TKO.

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Consistency/Structure:Zac the Ripper
Creativity:L_Nino
Enjoyable:L_Nino
Flow:L_Nino
Metaphors:L_Nino
Multies:L_Nino x 100
Personal:L_Nino x 100
Punches:L_Nino x 100
Vocabulary:L_Nino
Wordplay:L_Nino
Overall: L_Nino

I didn;t even have to do bar by bar breakdown, it was TKO as soon L_Nino dropped his lines.

[madchild]

NO MORE FREEPOSTING, ONLY VOTES!

[a.i.d.s.]

Consistency/Structure:Zac
Creativity:L_Nino
Enjoyable:L_Nino
Flow:L_Nino
Metaphors:L_Nino
Multies:L_Nino
Personal:L_Nino
Punches:L_Nino
Vocabulary:L_Nino
Wordplay:L_Nino
Overall: L_Nino

cant agree more with enfleurage, nino is just lightyears away from ya holmes.

[L_Nino]

2-0 L


..Uppin' the KO to ban some bitches :D

[a.i.d.s.]

Yo Nino, you say you a tight rapper and you think you all that/
muthafucka why not just admit it you know you're wack/

-hmm, thats weak, i want my money back for that lame "rhyme" like enfleurage said,
no thinking at all.

You always talking shit and you think you always right/
well, guess what, punk-bitch, I'ma fucking drop you tonight/

-2nd bar, time to put out cool rhymes (not basic), but thats exactly what you did.
if you dont have a cool word to rhyme then put doubles or tripples out.

I know millions of peeps who can rhyme better than you/
fuck, my little cuz can rap better, she's only two./

-first really punch, but still wack. but the bar has sense.

You may not know, but my rhymes are strategic/
I'll fucking take you out at the kness, make you parapalegic/

-sorry my english isn't good enough to understand parapalegic, so no vote for this one.
except the fact that you are not strategic

Nino I thought you was cool, till you started talking shit/
Bitch, win or lose, regardless, I'll show you I won't be fucked with./

-please go away, the object of the finish is to rip your oponent apart....


overall: in germany we say "Zweckreime" thats what you did, look it up if you want to know
what it means and you will understand.



1) Zac the Ripper?, I beg to differ...He more like HANDICAPPED PIZZBOYS cuz HE CAN'T DELIVER /
TOO EASY, You can find him 'round a FAGGOT's ZIPPER cuz ZAC A GIVER...RIPPIN' WHO? How this faggot figure, NO WINS, HIS SIG SHOW HE AINT A RIPPER /

-yeah, nice multies, nice flows. good and slow start for an opener.

2) Plus YOU NO ONE TO FOLLOW KID, Must be GAYS if THEY LIKE TO FOLLOW DICK...Or Are YOU CHICKS? Cuz ya LEADER got yall in a ABUSIVE RELATIONSHIP: YOU CANT GET OUT OF IT/
NO LP, SLIMSHADY's a COUNTERFEIT, SUNBURN 'bout AS HOT YOU GET...& SPIT's A BITCH, Dont let HIS NAME confuse you, The $P1TTA really SWALLOWS IT/....

-hahahaha, yeah thats nice i like that. the vocab and flow is good.

3) L's a GAYBASHER, STATIC A FAGGOT, So THIS FIGHT ISNT FAIR...HE SCARED, HIS TRUE COLOR's YELLOW & I aint talkin' about the BLONDE DYE IN HIS HAIR / (dyes his hair....fag)
Zac warned STATIC that he would be dyin' in there....So HE DIDNT SHOW UP, Zac THREW IN HIS TOWEL FOR HIM, Couldn't be ABOVE ME if HE WAS FLYIN' IN THE AIR /

-i didnt like the last rhyme, was more a filler i guess but overal a nice bar.

4) TOO BASIC, Ya LINES are CURTIS JACKSON that means PLENTY PLAYED....My shit FLIP BOARDS that's ENDIN' ANY GAME, YOU NEVER GET ANY FAME /
KKz was NO SHOWS like CLOSED MATINEES, Ashamed & soon to post under any name...Cuz he runnin' with a TEAM FULL OF PUSSIES & he's not even in the W.N.B.A /

- well i didnt like the words you rhymed but the flow is right again and the multies
are sick again.

5) I HEAT SCRIPTS, My verse FAULTY WIRING, It'll BURN YA LINES...NO AUDIO PLEASE!! If I WAS YOU, I'd BE A BITCH but I'd QUIT RAP if I HEARD YA RHYMES /
NEVER KRIMINALZ!! Yall BARELY 14 & got NO PRIORS, TRUE FACTS'll HURT YA LIES...Cuz the only KONDEMNED KRIMINALZ I know about are already SERVIN' TIME /

-aight, cool finish dissin the whole cru and puttin the fact they all 14.


Overall: one of the weaker things of ya, but you ripped him apart and i got sumthin for
the money.


aight with that? i will not go back on my words!!! if any of you 2 got a prob than its your prob not mine.

[FrOg]

if theirs any doubt here a came to solve it

Consistency/Structure:Zac
Creativity:L_Nino
Enjoyable:L_Nino
Flow:L_Nino
Metaphors:L_Nino
Multies:L_Nino
Personal:L_Nino
Punches:L_Nino
Vocabulary:L_Nino
Wordplay:L_Nino
Overall: L_Nino

Zac you r goood but nino smack you down this time

[Zac the Ripper]

all right, nino won by ko. as much as I hate to say it, a deal is a deal... starting may 1st, kkz is out for a month. (I still don't get how nino puts two bars together and calls them one and everyone buys it... no offense, nino, but no matter how you spat that, it'd still come out to 10 bars.) anyways... we'll be back the begginning of june.. oh, and I didn't take all the spots.. I accepted and I said we had till midnight to accept, and no one did. but anyways, a deal's a deal.

[madchild]

I just deleted 3 full pages of freeposts in this battle. If anyone who battled in here OR freeposted in here, freeposts again, they will be banned. Consider this a warning.

Only "Zac the Ripper" has been banned temporarily for a month due to the agreement of this battle. His other crew members were not made aware of this agreement and did not agree to it in any posts.

L Nino wins 3-0 KO.

Zac the Ripper will gain access automatically after a month. Do not message me, it will happen automatically.

~Madchild